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EXILED : The journey of Unique Hero ELEMENTAL

In a distant future, where continents have merged, new powers have arisen, and the fate of the universe hangs in the balance, a young martial artist named Avalon discovers a hidden secret within himself. Hindered by his lack of understanding and a poor upbringing, he faces numerous challenges and ridicule from those around him. What happened next? How he overcame those ordeals? Dive-in in my world and find out.... "Exiled : The journey of Elemental" is a thrilling and action-packed novel that combines elements of science fiction, fantasy, and martial arts. It explores themes of self-discovery, friendship, and the enduring power of the human spirit. With its dynamic characters, captivating world-building, and unexpected twists, this epic tale will leave you on the edge of your seat, eagerly turning the pages to uncover the ultimate destiny of Avalon and the fate of the universe itself. NOTE : The initial 3 chapters are a bit slow as I'm trying a new approach but you'll definitely have fun after that. Enjoy ;)

ShivamSingh · ファンタジー
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10 Chs

Chapter 1 : THE FINAL BATTLE

POV - Elemental (Avalon Pulse) 

Boom Zap Boom-Boom.

It was more than chaos, and at the heart of this planetary level of destruction stood Elemental, covered in black armor that resembled a second skin on his lean body. The armor seemed to absorb the light emanating from the tiger-like stripes and the intense explosions and attacks around him. His eyes, multi-colored and glowing with a mix of anger of betrayal yet radiating bone-chilling calmness, sent shivers down anyone who dared to meet his gaze. His silver hair defied gravity, floating upwards without the presence of any wind, while crimson blood dripped from almost every part of his body, staining the once-white stripes red. Gritting his teeth in pain, he muttered, "If those damn bastards hadn't succumbed to their greed for power and defended Earth instead of pursuing Antimatter, I wouldn't have had to sacrifice most of my armor to protect the Solar System from his henchmen."

This battle wasn't taking place on Earth but in the vast expanse of outer space. It was a clash between the universe's mightiest heroes and their most formidable adversary, Antimatter.

As Elemental surveyed the devastation, memories of his past flooded his mind. He was once a hero, revered by the people and admired for his extraordinary abilities. But his rise to power had been short-lived. Betrayal had shattered his world, and he had been cast aside, exiled from his own kind.

I don't care if it's constructive or destructive, I just want CRITICISM. Abuse me, praise me, tell me if it's exciting or boring, but just guide me.

See ya soon in next chapter dawg...

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