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DROPPED:Juvenile Entertainer

作者: Flat_Moon
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Warning: Harem, system, slow-paced, CRINGE and system with a bad personality. This has been dropped. This is my first novel which had a lot of problems from the pacing, power scale and grammar. Read knowing that it has no end. To be a star is a simple Idea but to turn a boy that's been secluded from Society into one is much more difficult. Even if you took on his body you still felt his anxiety, insecurity and more. It's slow but worth it. _____________________________________________________ Authors Note: The novel you are about read contains strong language and some vivid sexual content The Mc is beta at the start as he is a character that suffers from anxiety due to his upbringing. Although it did take 23 chapters for the Mc to show visible growth that's just due to my naturally slow pacing. Don't expect too much, especially since this is my first time writing a novel. It's also best not to take seriously as I am just writing for fun and to just something to do on my downtime This novel will share a lot of similarities to other novels that I particularly love and mostly because I lack originality but it will be in my style. UPLOAD SCHEDULE Tuesday, Wednesday and Saturday

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Chapter 1Chapter 1 Tough Kid

In a dark alley was 20 year old Theodore Hunt with his chest rising and falling slower as time passes and as his blood seeps out from the wound his life flashed before him.

Theodore Hunt, an orphan from birth was fostered at two by an old man from New York's reveil matinal orphanage foundation.The old man would later be known as grandpa.

Most of his life is life filled with simple happy memories of school, friend's and his time with his grandpa, but all good things come to an end at some point.

At 18 his life seem to just drastically spiral downwards, he left school with average grades. He had trouble finding a stable job and when he had job he would then be fired after only a week. He avoided any contact with friends.

At 19 his only family, grandpa died of a stroke leaving him alone once again

At 20 well... he valiantly saved a beautiful women from mugging but he died in the process and yes it's his birthday.

In an old European country style bungalow house was an 18 year old boy who was arched over a table starts to wake up "cough cough"spits out a sausage

"ahhhh! that hurt wait...I'm a live and where am I !!"

Theo took good look around.He was currently sat at a dinning table, that had a plate of freshly cooked sausage and mash(mashed potatoes) with sweet corn. In a state of confusion he is abruptly hit with an intense headache, his eyelids start feeling heavy "WHAT THE F...!" he loses consciences and fell face first into the plate.

Time passes by and he finally wakes up once again but this time with food on his face. He licks a bit of mash that was on corner of his lip "hmm not bad"

He finishes the plate and heads to the kitchen to wash it, while washing the dishes he thinks about his current situation.

During his nap he learnt that this isn't his body but the body of Theodore Smith. The original owner is technically not dead if anything there souls fused to became one entity.

Going through the memory's, he basically knows the story behind the original owner. Theodore Smith was born in small town in England and was raised by his mom and dad till he was 9.

The memory that stood out was the image of 9 years old Theodore Smith sat in the back seat watching his Dad and Mom attempting to navigate their way through typical British weather which consists of thick fog and heavy rain. It came to sharp turn, the car seemed to lose its traction with the road.

His dad could be seen struggling to regain control and his mom screaming with her eyes closed, in the end it swerved into the guard rails and flipped the car, shattered glass scattered across the street and the sound of a child's cry echoing throughout the road.

9 old Theodore Smith witnessed his parents take there last breath. The whole ordeal left him with physical and emotional scars.

When his grandpa picked him up from the hospital, a doctor pulled him to the side "After monitoring him for the last 7 days we found that he shows signs of PTSD, we recommend that he sees in therapist every week or so and here are some the medication "

Grandpa told him that they would be going to hospital often and that he would be home schooled by him.

3 months before his 18th birthday his grandpa died of a stroke.

At 18 Theodore Smith died after choking on a self made birthday dinner.

Whilst shaking his head, Theodore says lightly "sigh what a tough kid"

Strolling around the house he heads to the bathroom. He meets a 5.7 bony, pale as paper youth, long jet black scruffy hair that falls on his shoulders, small dry pale lips resting just below his high nose, above that were bloodshot amber eyes. Theodore jumps back out of fear but quickly realized that it's his reflection "holy shit! Is this a joke, I look like the embodiment of death"

A few minutes after admiring him self, he looks at his reflection and aimlessly asks "So what now??"

[Ding,Ding Ding Congratulations]

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Writing quality 4/5. nothing to complain. updates 4/5: good release rate. story:3/5 Lets be honest, he is "compared" to the last two that "had" this system pursues materialistic gain and fame. Two of the worst traits of humanity: vanity and greed. so this is a sold 2/5. Also the cliches, the unreal behavior of people and so on. Character: I am biased, one of the things I hate the most is the cliche power\system with its own ego, and this novel the system has a very very ugly and annoying ego, at certain points you just want the "system" to go and die. ontop of that is the failure penalty for missions (spoiler: donate 100k $, or what ever currency it uses, or be registered as a *** offender, yes this came out of no where. Do this **** in a week or loose your hair, so on and so one), this just shows poor humor at best and laziness on part of the author, instead of coming up with original story to light fire under the MC or at the very least think of a proper failure penalty (reward: +2 strength, failure: -2 charisma, etc). MC: To be fair I am at chapter 23 but MC is a spinless yes man. Past 3 chapters we already encountered several situation he was forced to do something he didnt want or feel comfortable with only because the person pushing him has tits (aka his mistress or so it seems). To be honest, most of the time his goal if wanting to be a Star, what ever that means doesn't really seem like something he wants, at least not with that personality: he is shy, does not like crowds, private and so on. World: 2/5 duh, its earth so nothing much is original yet. I will keep reading any may even update this novel but up to here its nothing much. The author would do better to concentrate on his newer novel marvel father something. The worst thing about a novel is when the MC is average at best and you feel he does not deserve what he has.

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