Dragon Monarch: Dragon's Will Manifestation

Hi, this is the author giving the novel a review to serve as a guide for new readers. 1. Grammatical errors are kept to a very minimal as possible as published chapters are proofread and edited to the author's best capabilities as an English speaker. 2. The main genre of this novel is fantasy action, it is the genre I am extremely confident in my writing due to my martial arts knowledge. However, I am currently experimenting with the rom-com genre. It is my first time writing rom-com and I hope to learn and improve on the way. Despite that, the readers enjoyed the rom-com parts so far, so I think it's worth a laugh and hopefully not too cringe-worthy. 3. The main protagonist of the story is a woman named Blaze, the stunning woman on the cover. This aspect may be rare and new for some readers for the novel's main genre. 4. Some side characters may develop relationships with multiple individuals due to the culture of their settings, however, the MC and ML will remain only for each other. 5. Cultivation is unexplored at the beginning of the novel but will play a vital role as the story progresses deeper. 6. I am trying to keep a regular update(a chapter every day) to satisfy the release stability for readers, however, I cannot promise that will strictly be the case. Life happens and there may be breaks and pauses here and there, but I am doing my best to keep the story ongoing. 7. The novel will take longer to finish as I build a vast world full of dragons yet to know and explore. 8. By having Sci-fi, Magic, Cultivation, Martial Arts, and Rom-com on the table, the world I've created became complex but interesting to read which much to give. Alright, I think that's all. I appreciate reviews but please don't leave one if you didn't read the novel at all. Some are just using the review section to promote their novel or offer a contract. It will only push new readers away so I will delete it if I find one. I also appreciate valid criticism as it will help me see what I am lacking. But please if you want to criticize and leave a 1-star review, make it constructive and not just hate. I will delete pure hate comments but will retain the constructive ones. Thank you! Please give my book a try, I'm sure many of you will enjoy it!

Leaving this review to say to not be intimidated by the first chapters because compared to chapter 1, the recent updates with chapter 28-31 are a rollercoaster of silliness. I haven't read many fantasy novels here in webnovel but the plot and world-building of the story is well-done. The descriptive narratives are straight forward and it's easy to picture the scenes. The world-building can be grasped in doses so it's not overwhelming to the readers. The characters all have their distinct personalities that even if the focus is on the side characters, it's never boring. They are not there just when it's convenient and have their own lives or storylines. Some might not be fond of this but so far, the side characters are entertaining and not hard to like. As for the ladies and for ladies at heart, if you're wondering about the romance parts of the story, there is a fair share of it. I believe there will be a range of romance to witness—from cringey to sweet to steamy to downright comical. There will be something for everyone. All in all, keep up the good work, author!

Finally a good action story with an admirable female lead!!! A DEEP WORLDBUILDING TO A STORY THAT FULL OF DIFFERENT DRAGONS IS THRILLING!!!!! First of all, the characters and world are excellently developed and established early on. The story will definitely pull you in. The intriguing, emotional start will definitely make you invest in Blaze (Nice name for a woman btw!!!). This is what I am looking for in fantasy novels, the realistic feeling that will make you connect with the characters and relate to their real struggles. The MC will take a path of revenge because of the tragic event in the first chapter, her objective is clear early on. I like revenge story so we'll see if this will not disappoint. But what I like the most here aside from the worldbuilding is the other elements that made me keep reading, the snippets of R18 comedies, the intense and detailed martial arts fights, and the dragons. Other complex elements are not thoroughly elaborated yet like the other factions but that's because there are less than 30 chapters by the time I made this review. But I am looking forward to knowing more about this astonishing story. The reading immersion is smooth too. The transitions of points of view are smooth as well. I could imagine how many times the author proofread and edited the chapters to make them presentable and enjoyable like what she/he said in the synopsis or maybe it's easy to understand because the author is a native English speaker. This dragon-slayers in a dragon world story absolutely deserves a try!!! The author executed everything well and the story has the potential to be one of the tops here. Kudos! Overall, it's a great read. It's worth a try reading this! Give it a chance! You will not regret it! I hope I provided a good review without spoiling everything hehehehe. Thanks for the effort making this Author. You did a splendid job. 🤗😊

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It's hard to comment on a blossoming novel but this novel definitely has the potential to be great. The grammar and word choices are outstanding compared to most novels on this app. The originality of this is what attracted me. It didn't follow the common tropes here on this app. I am excited about the various dragons this novel can offer. Please don't drop this novel. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is rightful to be called a HIDDEN GEM!

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This is my first time reading a story with a plot like this. The synopsis already caught my attention. The story is skillfully written! I hope one day I can write as skillfully as this hehehe 🥰💖 I like how the characters are described. They are interesting in their own way. The pacing looks good too. 🥰💖 I'm keeping this in my library. I hope the author can update more, I can't wait to know what will happen next 🥺💖

AMA EYZING!!! The cover is smexy! And I like how this story was written, great character! I love this Blaze girl! Strong! Great job! If you don't read this book, you will be cursed till eternity!

Hmmm, the opening, its very sad and heartbreaking I could feel the grief that the MC was trying to convey to the readers, I personally like this kind of theme thus I present a five star rating just for you~!

Though I've only read a few, I was stunned on how the author plays with words that I couldn't even compare to other authors out there. It was descriptive enough that I couldn't stop reading the contents and that alone gave me the idea that throughout the journey of the author writing the story, it'll keep on improving. It was a great read and I hope to read more chapters from the author. Sincerely, Cie❤

there are some words that I might need to search on google to continue with the story but I guarantee that this book is worth the shot! The world building is great and the setting is nice.. tho I have one concern with the female characteristics of the MC... i get that it is a barbaric woman that probably hab the strength of a thousand man, i am still hoping to see the feminine side of the character to see how versatile she is when it comes to her emotion. nonetheless, it is a good novel and worth the time to read!

A pretty good novel! The author give life to the characters and made them as realistic as it can be which have it's pros and cons but well, for me he did it good. The first chapter there are moments that I don't know if I should be laughing but, it's a good read you all! I highly recommend it

5/5 First let me say this, the author has done an amazing job. From the synopsis down to the story itself, one could tell that it was skillfully thought of. The plot is unique and had instantly piqued my interest, though to be honest, I really love strong female leads and fantasy (ehem), plus romance of course. However, bias aside, if you are into this genre, I highly recommend that you give this novel a try, I can promise that it's worth it. I have nothing more to say in regards to the writing quality, the author has a wide vocabulary. There's a perfect blend of descriptions to paint the scene and left enough space for you to imagine the rest. 5/5 too for the setting. The world where dragons and dragon hunters exists is clearly depicted and the emotion in every chapter felt real. I love love how this novel is going so far, kudos to the author. I enjoyed reading each chapter. 🥂 P.S. Fingers crossed, hopefully they end up together, Winter x Blaze 😁

5/5 ٩(◕‿◕｡)۶ Good synopsis and storyline (´• ω •`) The pacing is also alright (*¯︶¯*) I personally love the story telling technique of the author. As a reader, I also feel what the lead character feels because the words were well-written ヽ(o＾▽＾o)ノ Keep writing please, I'm rooting for ya ٩(｡•́‿•̀｡)۶

Partial chapters but it can get the attention of the reader mostly when they like about the dragons with a twisted love story behind the characters. I couldn't say more of the style of the writings since every author has a minimal mistakes from every chapters. But I would say thay it's well written so good point to that. And I'm looking forward to the romance of this story even though it starts with the heartbreaking relationship. I highly recommend this story so pleache check this out. Good luck in the future, Author-nim!