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BerriApplepi
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2021-05-26 13:29

This is my first time reading a story with a plot like this. The synopsis already caught my attention. The story is skillfully written! I hope one day I can write as skillfully as this hehehe 🥰💖 I like how the characters are described. They are interesting in their own way. The pacing looks good too. 🥰💖 I'm keeping this in my library. I hope the author can update more, I can't wait to know what will happen next 🥺💖

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QueenDragoness
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Thank you so much. ☺😊

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QueenDragoness
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Hi, this is the author giving the novel a review to serve as a guide for new readers. 1. Grammatical errors are kept to a very minimal as possible as published chapters are proofread and edited to the author's best capabilities as an English speaker. 2. The main genre of this novel is fantasy action, it is the genre I am extremely confident in my writing due to my martial arts knowledge. However, I am currently experimenting with the rom-com genre. It is my first time writing rom-com and I hope to learn and improve on the way. Despite that, the readers enjoyed the rom-com parts so far, so I think it's worth a laugh and hopefully not too cringe-worthy. 3. The main protagonist of the story is a woman named Blaze, the stunning woman on the cover. This aspect may be rare and new for some readers for the novel's main genre. 4. Some side characters may develop relationships with multiple individuals due to the culture of their settings, however, the MC and ML will remain only for each other. 5. Cultivation is unexplored at the beginning of the novel but will play a vital role as the story progresses deeper. 6. I am trying to keep a regular update(a chapter every day) to satisfy the release stability for readers, however, I cannot promise that will strictly be the case. Life happens and there may be breaks and pauses here and there, but I am doing my best to keep the story ongoing. 7. The novel will take longer to finish as I build a vast world full of dragons yet to know and explore. 8. By having Sci-fi, Magic, Cultivation, Martial Arts, and Rom-com on the table, the world I've created became complex but interesting to read which much to give. Alright, I think that's all. I appreciate reviews but please don't leave one if you didn't read the novel at all. Some are just using the review section to promote their novel or offer a contract. It will only push new readers away so I will delete it if I find one. I also appreciate valid criticism as it will help me see what I am lacking. But please if you want to criticize and leave a 1-star review, make it constructive and not just hate. I will delete pure hate comments but will retain the constructive ones. Thank you! Please give my book a try, I'm sure many of you will enjoy it!

Nocturnal_Dreamer
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Finally a good action story with an admirable female lead!!! A DEEP WORLDBUILDING TO A STORY THAT FULL OF DIFFERENT DRAGONS IS THRILLING!!!!! First of all, the characters and world are excellently developed and established early on. The story will definitely pull you in. The intriguing, emotional start will definitely make you invest in Blaze (Nice name for a woman btw!!!). This is what I am looking for in fantasy novels, the realistic feeling that will make you connect with the characters and relate to their real struggles. The MC will take a path of revenge because of the tragic event in the first chapter, her objective is clear early on. I like revenge story so we'll see if this will not disappoint. But what I like the most here aside from the worldbuilding is the other elements that made me keep reading, the snippets of R18 comedies, the intense and detailed martial arts fights, and the dragons. Other complex elements are not thoroughly elaborated yet like the other factions but that's because there are less than 30 chapters by the time I made this review. But I am looking forward to knowing more about this astonishing story. The reading immersion is smooth too. The transitions of points of view are smooth as well. I could imagine how many times the author proofread and edited the chapters to make them presentable and enjoyable like what she/he said in the synopsis or maybe it's easy to understand because the author is a native English speaker. This dragon-slayers in a dragon world story absolutely deserves a try!!! The author executed everything well and the story has the potential to be one of the tops here. Kudos! Overall, it's a great read. It's worth a try reading this! Give it a chance! You will not regret it! I hope I provided a good review without spoiling everything hehehehe. Thanks for the effort making this Author. You did a splendid job. 🤗😊

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