Destroy Worlds of Fiction with Science

The only flaw in my opinion, is the development of the story and the character, everything else I consider quite good. The development is good, it's a little cliché what is annoying to me, but nothing so important, but as the development of the story is oriented to the MC makes it worse the qualification that it would have, more than anything because the MC to be so smart, seems to me quite silly in many occasions (I read until chapter 44). The author makes his dick move so that he can't get OFA for the plot obviously, and he makes the excuse that the power of the main character links him to that world, that is, pure shit. But the most annoying thing I found was how silly he is to play with his soul and link it to animals without thinking about the obvious, they are animals, besides the fact that they are not really useful, he is playing with your soul, even in the chapter of the robbery the system tells him that he should not do that because he could die, and he ended up tying his soul to some random dog, a crazy squirrel, and a grumpy snake, while giving them their power to Adapt and Improve, which bothers me but that's already personal to me and not a bad thing in the plot, I think. I just find MC so careless, silly, childish and unimaginative, since the author made him look like someone who is quite smart and seems to think things through, but then does something silly like playing with his soul.

Good Fanfic but ill pass on my knowledge to you. dont ever use memes in your writing memes go bad and become cringy usually in 5 Months or less and that is just cringy like the get out of my roo im playing minecraft one that was just cringy. you should feel ashamed.

Writing Quality 5/5: Can't complain about this too much it's pretty much flawless which is an amazing upgrade compared to other novels. Sorry Development 2/5: This is where I have most of my problems, it's the same old the character gains too much stuff and completely forgets about said stuff and the stuff ends up being completely gone even when said stuff is important. Character Design 2/5: This is dogshit, it doesn't show the progress of his age and stuff, heck I don't even remember the last time you displayed the MCs hair colour, eye colour, height and stuff same with his fimiliars, you said they would go through genetic changes yet it seems as though nothing has happened. Updating Stability 4/5: It's good World Background 4/5: It's kinda un-needed as it's a fanfic and people can just Google shit so geab

Started of good, but rapidly degraded. Webnovel rating system is a dumpster fire, so if I am being honest, it turned out to be 2.4 stars, even though it is better than other novels I rated with the same rating. The story starts of really good, but just becomes BS in a few chapters. His wishes are wasted, thinking idiotic in logic flawed. There are some moments that are so overplayed which makes it painful to read. All characters behave weirdly, both from canon and from the ff itself. The MC's personality is constantly contradicting itself, which is extremely annoying. His very goals become useless after chapter 5, when he forgets them. Every single one of his powers is misused and lacks any imagination. For example, there are almost no limits to his enchantments, which he could easily abuse to grow stronger at astronomic speeds. Yet he just creates two items which are incredibly stupid. A sword and a shield. A soul stealing sword and a soul binding shield. OK. The MC created it to improve, yet it didn't. He killed thousands of people with it, without asking a single question. HE HAS A SYSTEM, THAT WOULD ANSWER MOST QUESTIONS, yet he doesn't ask a single interesting question. He spends years living in the new world, yet he never once thinks for a second to bring out all of his own potential. He even has an ability that gives him ideas, yet he doesn't use it at all. This is just lazy writing. ||| Sorry for the negativity, I am way too tired both mentally and of stories with no thought put into them. A few things for the author: I recommend you don't use memes. They become old and stale after a month, which is annoying. I don't have too much of a problem with it, but still. Try to think of clever ways of using his powers. I find it extremely entertaining when I think of ways to use different supernatural powers. Well, I guess you don't have the time to think, so I can't really fault you (not that I could either way, just an expression). This it from my side, so good luck and have fun!

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The Mc is really irritating

The novel started well and continues poorly. mc doesn't use his brain............................................................................

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Good start..................................................................................................................................

my ratings is enough about how I feel about this book...so why do I need to type so much sh*t....so what was I saying...ohh I met required words...so need to type anymore

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Thanks for the chapters keep writing, great work on every chapter, thanks for your hard working and hope you can publish more chapters in future...

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Normal story so far but the jabs and references makes it very fun to read. I 'll wait for the story to progress and hope that the author progress with this writing style.