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2020-09-04 01:19

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Started of good, but rapidly degraded. Webnovel rating system is a dumpster fire, so if I am being honest, it turned out to be 2.4 stars, even though it is better than other novels I rated with the same rating. The story starts of really good, but just becomes BS in a few chapters. His wishes are wasted, thinking idiotic in logic flawed. There are some moments that are so overplayed which makes it painful to read. All characters behave weirdly, both from canon and from the ff itself. The MC's personality is constantly contradicting itself, which is extremely annoying. His very goals become useless after chapter 5, when he forgets them. Every single one of his powers is misused and lacks any imagination. For example, there are almost no limits to his enchantments, which he could easily abuse to grow stronger at astronomic speeds. Yet he just creates two items which are incredibly stupid. A sword and a shield. A soul stealing sword and a soul binding shield. OK. The MC created it to improve, yet it didn't. He killed thousands of people with it, without asking a single question. HE HAS A SYSTEM, THAT WOULD ANSWER MOST QUESTIONS, yet he doesn't ask a single interesting question. He spends years living in the new world, yet he never once thinks for a second to bring out all of his own potential. He even has an ability that gives him ideas, yet he doesn't use it at all. This is just lazy writing. ||| Sorry for the negativity, I am way too tired both mentally and of stories with no thought put into them. A few things for the author: I recommend you don't use memes. They become old and stale after a month, which is annoying. I don't have too much of a problem with it, but still. Try to think of clever ways of using his powers. I find it extremely entertaining when I think of ways to use different supernatural powers. Well, I guess you don't have the time to think, so I can't really fault you (not that I could either way, just an expression). This it from my side, so good luck and have fun!

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