DC: The Authority

Mandatory author review here. Forgot to do this during the first run of the book. Now that I've changed things, I feel the need to do it and provide a summary of the changes I revamped the novel for a number of reasons but these are the main two. 1. I did not have a solid plot. 2. The Custom Made System made things too easy for the mc so I switched it with my idea for another novel where the system will make more sense. If you're interested, please, read to find out. And kindly leave a review.

Writing quality is good. Very easy to follow and very few errors. There are some but definitely can be chalked up to mistakes or not paying attention. The updates originally were non existent but have recently become decent. The story development, character design, and world background are all at the minimum. As writing continues these can all be expanded. The story does try to play off the consequences of killing a little to much and way to much internal conflict about it. Way more than personal experience or what I have seen with others. The characters have not had time to be fleshed out yet and the world is so far based to much on someone else’s ideas (the show). Hopefully the author gets time to build their own world as it deviates further. Has potential and worth a read to help develop it.

meh across the board... wish fulfillment zero effort power ups

The way the author has written this book is just perfect. The way he makes his character evolve to suit his need of a trigger happy character makes the readers believe it. As a bonus, no pesky flashback explaining his background because the author uses his character's actions and thoughts and one can understand where the character is coming from. Overall, good character creation and good story build so far.

During the first sixteenish chapters, I was unsure that I should continue to read the fanfic due to the mc’s anxiety attacks and the characters’ incessant prattle about the morality of murder. Nevertheless, after the rough patch, the story does improve.

I'm not a bot, I recommend you guys to read it .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

OK, this originally had 40 chapters according to my "reading progress", then chapter count dropped to 5, and when I went to check out the novel I only saw 2 chapters. So what the heck?

with so many regurgitated dumpster fires on here this was a breath of fresh air. likeable mc well written and thought out. the mc shows a level of maturity and self awareness that makes him relatable.

So... good Please don't drop Make p a t r i o n -> story is worth it. --- A lot more grounded & mindful adaption of "custo made demon kings powers". M.c. is smart enough to overcome him drawbacks and negative Status using his cheats --- I just hope the author doesn't do the usual thing in this novels & power him up too fast leaving us without the sence of excitement... but you wanna go that route refer "meta essence gacha". & consider out of dc arcs where m.c. gain more power experience & enjoy being a murder-hobo on an omniversal scale. Hide ROB would love that.

a rather long buildup at the beginning (all these internal monologues and experiences in whole chapters !!), but you get used to it and it turns out to be a good fanfic (in which knowledge of the canon will not help the hero much)))).

Excellent. The system is well utilized and the progression feels satisfying. can't wait till he leaves the island. wordwordwordwordwordwordwordwordword

Good fanfiction 10/10 out for me and my brother's and sister's who likes quality content..

the way the author has written this book is just perfect. The way he makes his character evolve to suit his need of a trigger happy character makes the readers believe it. As a bonus, no pesky flashback explaining his background because the author uses his character's actions and thoughts and one can understand where the character is coming from. Overall, good character creation and good story build so far.

pretty good so far..........................................................................................................................................................................

Amazing and entertaining. I love the MC, you really did a good job pls keep it up.

This fanfic is just...chef's kiss. The author has not spared any detail to the wind and his story telling just let's you have a vivid picture of what he's writing about. The only issue is updating but with the book's quality, I can't complain

Nice to see a Ghanaian author with such a good book since I'm Ghanaian myself. Meda w'ase.

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An actually really well thought out story as of chapter17, made me want go back and watch arrow past season 3. A real MC that is smart and makes realistic choices based on information he has. Even if I wouldn't have been some of these choices can't say I don't understand completely why he made them.

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