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Peak fiction. I would go as far as to dm the author 10 time and post multiple comments just to check if it’s not stolen work. Why do I say this. Because I love this work so much, it’s a really good story and feels like we are talking to real people. Mc is a real dork & I love her for it. 21, I dmed u on rr, just clarifying there as well.

😧😮🤣🤣🤣🤣 Now I have to delete this. I will. Still, I DMed you on RR. Just in case

@RandomBadass Ey bro You better not drop this gem of. Story outa nowhere

Really good. Like REALLY REALLY good. I don’t care most are borrowed characters But I do care about shokugki not being some godly event. But some in school club event. . So this world is pretty much all the sports anime worlds coming together. I can’t wait to see ippo. Or a nod to slam dunk team. But besides all that , the character’s & personalities are really well crafted and distinct. I love it. Maybe it would be great to have them check out all the other sports events as well, dia no ace, one outs. Yuri on ice….

Hmmm Instead of training in this space where. We know he is not going to die , no market how low his hp falls. & we know he is definitely going to master the skill. U have 2 options 1. Skip it all together and continue with the story. Or 2. Transport him to another different marial arts world (whichever world is well known for the martial arts he is training) and he has to make progress in the story and learn from the characters there. 1. This would increase the possibility of him never fully mastering the skill. 2. This would add stakes to the story that actually matter & introduce narrative elements. 3. We get more worlds & you get more interaction in your story (rabid fans begging you to send him to their favourite world, making him learn their favourite skill) *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge* This also means he can learn - safe fall from height, particing in assassin creed story, ( watching the real deal perform the thing and teaching him) - swift roll to dodge by becoming maiden less💀. - jojo pose from escaping stone men - learn kungfu from saving neo. (Going to the base) - learn water stream rock smashing fist by surviving the monster calamity. (Getting pointers from bang) These would also increase the stakes of the story. At this rate, It will get boring because he is a big fish in a small pond like now, being the Only person *cough* with a system in a normal world. Instead, he would be sent to worlds with gods & monsters where he would always be the small fry. The thing is even here we know he will not die. But the thing is… if he meets a major villain or a boss monster we know he’s done for, so he has to sneak and act smart till he learns the skill. And once he learns it & thinks he can’t learn anymore or when time runs out, he can be his normal kenpachi ahh self & do a heroic sacrifice (cause he ayn defeating any boss master any time soon, so he’ll be more of a mumen rider than kenpachi, which is WAAAY COOLER) You can also say that the skill learning that happened this way so far because, He was being taught enough to barely survive in the death worlds. (If he was sent there at he baseline he will not even survive a minute) Now he has to earn the skill from where they originated.

I’ll be honest. I’m skipping all of the training sessions. It’s like reading about someone climbing EVERY. SINGLE. STEP. When we all know they are going to get to the next floor. IMO. Literally nothing happens & your wasting your precious writing time

Another legendary character

No way his simple mental wards overcame the mirror. If it was the simple it would be easy for vodly to snatch it. & no way would Dumbledore trust it as the last bastion of defence. And he enchanted it further to prevent people who wanted the stone could never have it. This story is ridiculous and stupid, why is he preventing harry from taking cannon route when it has no advantage for him. ? How is dumbledor not constantly watching the hallway. ? Why is he beefing with Ron for no reason ? How is he so sure dumbledore doesn’t have access to 1000 more spells and artificacts he has not even thought of? Any of which could find the stone & him? How is he going to escape nic. flamel ? That man is a certified dark wizard

A hidden gem. I don’t know how to turn down the line, but as of now, it is really good, but . This seems to have been written years ago, and the translator doesn’t seem to know the latest rules of Nan and the updates to the Canon So it might be quite frustrating to read, provided their character is supposed to know everything, but he’s operating on all rules. But if we ignore that, and just consider just based on the standards of old rules. And of course, giving a 35% discount on quality & wisdom on account for it, Chinese ff origin. (No xeno phobia, here after all not a Chinese author, we all know the general trend and what’s very typical for Chinese fanfiction, given , the author, having to focus on Word count, rather than slow high quality releases, and the general proclivities of mainland readers) But. That said, it is genuinely a really good ff story

Old rules . The cannon & rules have been updated