webnovel

Cleanup Department

作者: HornyBoi
アニメ·コミックス
連載中 · 1.5M ビュー
  • 3 章
    コンテンツ
  • 4.8
    81 レビュー結果
  • N/A
    応援
概要

The beginning after the unknown end has transpired. Reincarnation under a forgotten contract. Bound by duties unknown to him, possessing great abilities he has no knowledge of, in this land encroached by Impurities, what does the future have in store for the one who reincarnated as Rokuro Enmado.

Chapter 1Author Time: I’m Back

I don't know what to say. I started writing fanfics when the pandemic lockdowns and was unable to continue my fanfics since my attention was divided between gacha gaming and my studies. It's been quite some time since I earnestly wrote a chapter. I even had thoughts of permanently stopping. I don't know the direction of my story and might end up as following the source material, nor do I know how to balance power scaling. I felt guilty at my incompetence to make what I wrote as interesting to the readers. There's also the issue of time management

About two years has passed, and ever since then, ideas for fanfic have been popping out non-stop. And recently, I thought that I must still have the thirst to write something.

This time, I plan to commit on this fanfic so I will make sure to take my time to write chapters that I can be satisfied with. But that will mean that I will be unable to release many chapters in a regular interval. I might not be able to reply to comments or review, so I apologize in advance. But I still look forward to your objective comments or reviews and I will read them from time to time. The story might progress slowly, so please have mercy on that account.

I want to give a short introduction for this new fanfic of mine, but I think I will just place that on the synopsis.

On a second, I can't think of a synopsis.

あなたも好きかも

Apocalypse Btch System

the story has 315 chapters please read it at my patre on page https://www.patr eon.com/Fatenovels .................................. Synopsis: On the wedding night the bride that is sitting on the bed in the bridal chamber waiting for her husband. “I have returned 16 years back in time. There is still 1 year before the apocalypse starts.” “Now I can have my revenge on that bastard husband of mine. That bastard has used me to sleep with his superiors climb up his job ranks, He used me to sleep with strong survivors gain supplies in the apocalypse. He stole my opportunities to get those rare treasures of the apocalypse. Finally when he became powerful he looked at other bitches and abandons me to die in the ditch like a used tissue paper. Hahaha…. Now I will have my revenge. Not only on you, but every single person that used me for their benefits would pay the heavy price.” Extreme heat, extreme cold, floods, tsunamis, mutated beasts and plants, zombies, meteorites…. “Ding Congratulations host for obtaining the Apocalypse Bitch System. Bitch, You can see your status panel that should appear after you reach the apocalypse land. You will get quests and choices from the system that would give you rewards and may be penalties some times. There is a system store that is currently locked before the start of the apocalypse. There will be special mission that can let you enter what you call it as literary works like Naruto, one piece, dragon ball… to gain special benefits. Your starter’s gift pack quest, Cuckold your husband on the day of the wedding…” That little ring that I got from my ancestor seems to have space or something. My bastard husband took it from me and gave it to some bitch for his fun. This time I will not let you have it. I am going to hoard all the supplies and live the life of a bitch that fucked the apocalypse….

souryourer · アニメ·コミックス
4.7
152 Chs

レビュー結果

  • 総合レビュー
  • テキストの品質
  • リリース頻度安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界観設定
レビュー
いいね
最新
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Well, you don't need this review, but I do. There is 2 very big problems with this novel, that makes me a bit of mad... As a dork on powers and power-levels, I have a problem with this system. Let me ask you, if you see a 100 thousands points of strength, when an new characters have just 10 in all stats, how strong you think it is? A tricky question, enough to break a wall.... I'm not kidding,okay. Apparently, f class stats in fate takes 400.000 thousands points and would be more than 1000 levels in this system.... How the ****?! All those overpowered skills from fate in ex ratings? Just some little boosts in certain situations and little flat boost to his statistics.... I would call it a scam, but oh well. On the other hands, mc is not op and struggling a lot in fights... That he logically shouldn't. I don't know how to take it, on the one hand, I don't like when all those stats and skills seems to be a scam, on the other, op mc is a bit bland, especially when he's best talent lies in farming... Maybe, you can just rework it? So people have easier time to understand? And second and it a bit more of objective problems. Reading first chapters and synopsis, you will expect some really evil /bad mc, right? Thinking it's would be someone new, not some struggling bipolar teenagers, who afraid of relationships and afraid of how evil he is, right? Well, **** you, and **** me. That's what you get. Some weird drama, that have no sense giving his background. Some emotional weaknesses, that look like belong in other type of stories. And a lot of lovey-dovey girls, even his yandere skill seems to be a rood. Yeah it's corny, very inconsistent and generally hurt me far more, than I expected it. It's look like different ideas that looks cool in author tastes, from shounen manga fights, some from shoujo dramas, and some from weird comedies, clash together with some angsty edgy stuff, right from 90s. Conclusion, if you come reading synopsis, for some really evil mc or harem without goody two shoes mc, well it's not exactly it. It's not so bad rating still pretty high, but when I look at those two huge problems, and read author thoughts, I became kind of upset. It's really sound like, I know it's stupid, but because I I say it should be so, that means you fall in my plan! - yeah, no. You can just rework you system, at least....

Mr_SlimePB
Mr_SlimePBLv10

thanks for the fanfiction because I really like the fact that you did not write any thing like mc saving someone or mc is weak to girls like other mc where just a random girl glare at mc then he would be scared. I also like the mc's personality because he does not care whether they are girl or boy, he treats them equally true equality where he treats everything equal. I also like it when mc can stop his girls from doing harm to mc, just because they are close to mc does not mean they could or should harm the mc, it is like someone got close to you then gives them the right to hit you just them being unreasonable. I also don't really care if the mc is manipulative because it just makes it more exciting. I don't really care if there are little to no r-18 because it doesn't really matter for me but could you, author, make a line where or if they have s*x just write like after they had s*x or just like time skip it really is ok. overall the fanfic is great for me.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

応援