Brothers with systems in the DC universe

Bro, honestly this is a good story. But I was dissatisfied with the lack of development and prominence of the other brothers because so far the story has only highlighted one of the three brothers.

As it's author's first time writing- the quality is quite lacking, hence 3 stars.On the other hand, story development, character design and others are 4stars.I will only suggest on writing because the story and idea is yours and you would know better than anyone else.Now; Writing- if possible please give first few chapters light edit, for eg, spaces b/w "" and next word or outright press enter key for every dialogue between brothers and/or other characters. Otherwise it gets too confusing to understand who is talking to whom, etc.Keep up the good work, Author-san😁👍🏽

Its a great fanfiction with even more potential so I hope the author adds many more chapters before it’s completed

Worth the read, I've been checking out a lot of the Marvel/DC fanfics lately. MC is getting stronger and stronger, or at least I think he's the MC, there are other brothers.

great start!! love the bromance I'm this.here's to hoping you get more exposure!

Escreva mais maninho, tô entendido e esse livro alta me salvando,a propósito,quais os sistemas dos outros irmãos dele ? Qual o limite de poder dele

bueno hasta donde leí la historia me dejó una cosa clara el autor no sabe una mierda de la función de dismastle y cleave el primero son cortes que generales con un daño fijo el otro es un corte que se adapta al poder y resistencia de quién sea que toque aumentando el gasto o bajando pero se necesita tocar el objetivo para activarlo y mahoraga siendo asesinado tan fácilmente con su propia arma siendo un shikigami formado por sombras no tiene sentido recomendación autor estudia bien como funciona las técnicas que le das al prota

it is good ................................................................................................................................................

While the characters seem to be a bit lacking sometimes, and some of the dialogue feels a bit forced, overall the story is entertaining, the chapters are a good length, and it is an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

really really good story lets keep on going