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perroelquelolea1
perroelquelolea1Lv42mth
2024-09-30 14:15

bueno hasta donde leí la historia me dejó una cosa clara el autor no sabe una mierda de la función de dismastle y cleave el primero son cortes que generales con un daño fijo el otro es un corte que se adapta al poder y resistencia de quién sea que toque aumentando el gasto o bajando pero se necesita tocar el objetivo para activarlo y mahoraga siendo asesinado tan fácilmente con su propia arma siendo un shikigami formado por sombras no tiene sentido recomendación autor estudia bien como funciona las técnicas que le das al prota

Brothers with systems in the DC universe

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vinicius_Br
vinicius_BrLv3

Bro, honestly this is a good story. But I was dissatisfied with the lack of development and prominence of the other brothers because so far the story has only highlighted one of the three brothers.

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Doctor_Blue
Doctor_BlueLv15

As it's author's first time writing- the quality is quite lacking, hence 3 stars.On the other hand, story development, character design and others are 4stars.I will only suggest on writing because the story and idea is yours and you would know better than anyone else.Now; Writing- if possible please give first few chapters light edit, for eg, spaces b/w "" and next word or outright press enter key for every dialogue between brothers and/or other characters. Otherwise it gets too confusing to understand who is talking to whom, etc.Keep up the good work, Author-san😁👍🏽

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Anime_fan1234
Anime_fan1234Lv15

Its a great fanfiction with even more potential so I hope the author adds many more chapters before it’s completed

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ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

Worth the read, I've been checking out a lot of the Marvel/DC fanfics lately. MC is getting stronger and stronger, or at least I think he's the MC, there are other brothers.

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Adeniran_Charles
Adeniran_CharlesLv11

great start!! love the bromance I'm this.here's to hoping you get more exposure!

1yr
Tiago_Cavalcante_5179
Tiago_Cavalcante_5179Lv1

Escreva mais maninho, tô entendido e esse livro alta me salvando,a propósito,quais os sistemas dos outros irmãos dele ? Qual o limite de poder dele

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Mr_n
Mr_nLv3

it is good ................................................................................................................................................

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KingLettuce
KingLettuceLv2

While the characters seem to be a bit lacking sometimes, and some of the dialogue feels a bit forced, overall the story is entertaining, the chapters are a good length, and it is an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………

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Ash_D_Born
Ash_D_BornLv4

really really good story lets keep on going

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