BNHA: Spiritual Aura

Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one

I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.

The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?

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Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?

So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.

This story is so far really entertaining to read. While it is a slow burn for now, it's a nice mix of slice of life and info/training. Can't wait to see how the story progresses through UA.

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I find it interesting that you introduce nen beasts or spiritual concepts into the world of MHA and how those energies affect those around the protagonist. As for the slow development, I don't mind. There are people who complain about that, but they forget that all the plots of Boku no Hero happen in the protagonist's first year as students. Personally, I don't care as long as it's well written and understood. As for the harem, it doesn't bother me. After all, I'm a veteran of DXD stories, where they exaggerate the harem. Take that gentleman, his 5 stars.

love the story don't care about the haters!!!

Really like słów and consistent pace. I always like to read about nen and its different applications on fanfics. Please keep up the good work.

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I liked it a lot, the writing is good, reasonably long chapters, my only complaint is the slow progress, almost 50 chapters and it hasn't entered the official list yet, I understand the character's development and why it gave a lot of life to his story, but it's a matter of taste. I myself don't like big backstories like that, basically I know Kai's childhood more than Midoriwa's

Really liked it, i read all the current chapters in one go, and the grammar is good enough. The author takes care to write a good world background, and explanations of surroundings but it could be better. The story development is nice and the character design is well done. Updates are consistent which is good and it shows that author tries hard to research things to explain. I quite liked that author tries to explain things properly and on point, it explains what needs to be explained with the abilities which I liked. So far there is only one short lemon and it was good while also showing the emotions of the characters and their feelings about which shows that the character have real feelings.

Me gusta mucho el trabajo que estás haciendo, escribo esto por el comentario de que hay gente que no le gusta lo lento que va la historia, a mi me parece que esta perfecto el desarrollo que lleva la historia. ya que si no fuera así con la cantidad de habilidades y relaciones del protagonista, todo sería muy apresurado sin contexto alguno de por qué están en una relación. de mi parte encuentro perfecto el desarrollo. sigue así 💯💯

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honestly it's a slow burn right now at about 40 chapters with mostly world building and power exploration with only one fight scene with the mc and one as origin story The SI quirk makes sense canonically and everything fits well for a fan fic which makes reading a bit easier. The writing also flows well so reading isn't a chore or obstacle to enjoying it like some others. Overall it's a good story; just don't have enough written to tell if it's great

It’s a decent MHA fanfic so I suggest you atleast give it like 5 chapters and you might like it.