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Braian_Suarez
Braian_SuarezLv17mth
2024-09-09 06:25

I find it interesting that you introduce nen beasts or spiritual concepts into the world of MHA and how those energies affect those around the protagonist. As for the slow development, I don't mind. There are people who complain about that, but they forget that all the plots of Boku no Hero happen in the protagonist's first year as students. Personally, I don't care as long as it's well written and understood. As for the harem, it doesn't bother me. After all, I'm a veteran of DXD stories, where they exaggerate the harem. Take that gentleman, his 5 stars.

BNHA: Spiritual Aura

lordanl
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lordanl
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Well, since I was missing one review to reach 10, I'm shamelessly doing it myself. Also, I'll take the opportunity to clarify that although the story has a dramatic beginning and there may be a bit more drama in the future, this novel is not a tragic one

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Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

I see a lot of non-relevant and erroneous information released in the story that takes away the desire to read a little, like lengthening something like the prologue too much.

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Xilt
XiltLv3

The prologue was trash and had too much info-dumping. Not to mention, this is a slow-paced novel—40 chapters in and it hasn't even reached UA yet? The pre-harem setup felt way too forced. If it were just one or two people, I could agree, but Nejire and Yaomomo? In canon, they didn't even know each other in childhood. Also, what's with every woman here being a shotacon?

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tentalagim
tentalagimLv4

Prologue is unnecessarily brutal and sad, but even 48 chapters in MC is still a small child with abilities that would already allow him to rule even the USA but he's still developing more Nen and Chakra and Haki next he'll unlock a Stand or Hamon from Jojo. There's been no development in the story yet and any kind of plot has yet to reveal itself.

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BurglarOfTurds
BurglarOfTurdsLv15

Reveal spoiler

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NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1

Trop d'info et bla bla inutiles faut raccourcir surtout que c le début de l'histoire alors c le moment pour gagner des lecteurs [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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TheHermitKing
TheHermitKingLv14

Reveal spoiler

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mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

It is for ruined my day with the prologue ................................................................................................................

7mth
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

It is less than 10 chaps review, but it is good so far; the prologue seems long, but it is easy to read and has potential. will there be lemons?

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HobessXD
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So far, so good it's kind of a sad start. Having a prologue was better than I died and what not. It was a nice change of pace. The characters introduced so far are good they have plenty of personality and emotions. I'm looking forward to where it goes from here. I skimmed around the first half prologue part 2 TMI for me, but don't let that deter you it's still a good read. That's the one thing I didn't like and figured I'd give you a heads up just in case. Once again a good read with a lot of possibilities.

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