Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Good post-apocalypse world story, but I just read 3 first chapters. I hope this novel would become best selling novel someday. Keep the spirit up!

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I read until chapter 170. The thing that i notice so far is. 1. Every chapter is too short and the author add his thoughts in every chapter adding to word count. 2. Story is too Slowwwwwww. 3. I dont know when the MC will become real alchemist...

I have read till 170 chapters and all I can say is that it is reaàaaaaaally slow.the chapters are short and I feel that quite a few of them could be avoided. The time it took the mc to open the rewards after completing a quest is like 6-8 chapters by which we will even forget what that quest is and many unnecessary interruptions in between. I can see that the author is trying for character development but I honestly feel it is a bit too dragging. While I feel the story is good but couldn't continue with such a dragging pace .

Hello, this is the Author of this novel. First I wanted to thank the readers who supported my book by giving my work a power stone. Not only it'll help me climb a rank but increase the exposure of this novel as well. This is me writing a review after 24 chapters and I believe that the story is still strong so please continue to support me as it motivates me a lot. Stay tuned as the story keeps getting better and depending on the feedback I receive from you guys, I'll upload more chapters per day.

Author here! I just wanted to thank you all for reading my book because doing so alone is motivating for me. At the same time, I wanted to be shameless and gave myself a five star review in the process. If you like the novel, Please don't forget to add it to your library, vote and comment, Note: The novel gets better as it progresses as i keep writing.

I quit, I can't read anymore. Too many plot holes. Mc annoys me This novel is designed to kill my brain cells. This novel can be read if you turn off the brain by 100%.

Writing Quality : Its good than 90% of the novels out there, although I've seen some types here and there. The POV shifts annoy me though because they are not my kind of thing (not saying they are bad but I'm not one of the POV shift liker no matter the novel Story Development :Story Development is good, not too many plot holes Character Design : The characters are designed well although i feel every character except the Mc is 2D (especially the children), at least until where i have read yet. But i do feel the protagonist's monologues annoying (which i will explain later) Updating Stability : Not much i know about it mate! World Background : The World Background is being built slowly but i feel like not much about the geography and terrain is talked about. Like, is everything around jungle? are there dense trees around or plains? etc. Now onto what i feel is lacking : The characters except Mc are a little too 2D, you should try to work on it. As for working stability, its always the more the better. Now the most crucial thing or annoying thing I find, the mc spends half or full chapter making a choice in monologues stating and unnecessary explaining the obvious and giving useless info. For example : 'I don't know if there's a higher Civilization' this sentence is repeated in almost every chapter and sometimes even more than once. A lot useless info is given in chapters and sometimes the useful part in a chapter is only worth 1 or 2 paragraphs. I know that some filler needs to be there to make the novel longer but i hope there is a balance ( like 50% is useful and 50% filler in a chapter from now's 75% filler at least in the chapters I'm reading currently). I'm saying this because sometimes its painful watching the character spending such long time on obvious decisions. That's all.

I am in chapter 68, I am afraid of one thing, and that is that you start to nerf the growth of the MC so that the others can catch up, for example with Brother Brian, we already know that the MC is more intelligent, a martial artist, physically an athlete , legendary class, and even so you leave a feeling like the brother will catch up, and the worst thing about this is that to catch up you will literally retard the growth of the MC or start giving Buffs to everyone, it is not necessary that the others are close to him in power, there are more things than power that are necessary, and if you keep wanting to match the others with the MC it's only more desperate. An example of the above is when the MC is described as athletic and a martial genius, his base body is already above 90% of the world, and now by level he goes up he is stronger, but out of nowhere you say that Chris has close to his damage power when he is a child and there is 0 chance that he will get close to his damage, for example, Ace strength multiplier by levels: N1-20 N2-40 N3-80 being Level one his base strength, now put For a child his base strength would be N1-10 N2-20 N3-40, and so at least at the beginning without training between levels, please stop comparing when it's far to start

The novel is really good I personally think it deserves more popularity than this honestly. First thing to know about this novel is that while it has its downs, it has it ups too. Update is daily Grammar is good Plot is okay All in all, the book is good for a serious read and to binge read.

Nice backstory and development, but the MC is just stupid. I got to 170, he now has his private dungeon with a time difference, tons of manuels and mana types and what does he do, he goes out hunting. Ok, again from the beginning, I'm not even talking about the fact that he keeps making estimates and they don't come true, but rather that he doesn't use everything to survive in the apocalypse. The tree with the 8 fruits, rank 2. Did he research their price, we don't know, but he didn't research the price of the pills either. That would be the first thing to do in the garage to be able to estimate when the creation is plus minus 0. Back to the fruits, assuming he can get them for 50,000 gold, because rank 2, prices probably rise exponentially. Then he gives the boy 2 and doesn't consume any himself so as not to get too strong. For 100,000 gold he could have possibly bought all the basic knowledge for everyone in his group and if he had then implemented any of it, he would definitely have gotten a regular job. But no, 6 Rank 2 fruits are there until chapter 170. He doesn't pick up quest rewards either. Days go by, he was in the dungeon for 3 days, but no, no time. Let's wait until we have a safe place. What could never have happened in the apocalypse. And then he has this space where time passes more slowly and he just doesn't use it. He goes out hunting instead of converting the things he has into his power.

Note: The first 60 chapters are FREE to read :D gee thanks. better than ones that go paid after 20-40 chapters but still kinda aids ngl. not paying $200 for a novel

Love this novel so far but chapters are a little short

this is the first time I have ever written a review on WN, and there is a few points I would like to express. FirstPOV style of writing is making the novels way too long and a bit boring for the for the readers. Second there is way too much information and explaining for things are obvious to the readers, for example, explaining Mabs or ranking for the new update. finally you would make the novel more interesting and fun for the readers if you keep it straight to the point and get rid of the POV style. ( thats my opinion based on my experience reading 500+ novels And to my liking).

A crazily well-written piece of work. It made my own book and the system came pale in comparison. To be honest, I am amazed by the naming sense, and storyline, as well as how well it was described without being lengthy. Furthermore, each chapter seems to link well with the next, without a hint of missing content in between. If I were to grade the book, I would say it only lacks the exposure necessary to get to the top. Easily one of the best read amongst the books in Webnovel.

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I started read because of webnovel recommendation and discover the book history is abandoned. Sad.

This has a good plot but author is petty enough to make long worded names of some items and status view repeat too much to fill the words count and too much duplicate chapters (feels like a scam to me as some people just buy chapter in bulk if they like a story and some chapters don’t even have decent story but only status view) so instead of consistency this author is trying something else ……. God bless u for ur future endeavours author

dear author, you mentioned the book was starting to lose support, I have some ideas why this might be happening in my opinion as a reader. You are focusing on the wrong things, you have been writing entire chapters dedicated to fights or pill creation and theory, which is good in small doses. But there are no meaningful interactions, the last I remembered was the rat nest and a lot of chapters passed with nothing feeling important. I am inclined to drop the novel because I don't feel emotions while reading it. Hope this helps you find the writing direction for the novel to grow, if you think is needed.