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Alan: Tale of Origin Blood

作者: Greymark
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What is Alan: Tale of Origin Blood

WebNovel で公開されている、Greymark の作者が書いた Alan: Tale of Origin Blood の小説を読んでください。A story of a boy, who tried to find his origins.A tale of worlds giving him more questions than answers.And a path of life that sneered at it.Current world: Witcher.Note: I own only characters and eve...

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A story of a boy, who tried to find his origins. A tale of worlds giving him more questions than answers. And a path of life that sneered at it. Current world: Witcher. Note: I own only characters and events of my own creation. It is a fan-fic story of HP/Witcher worlds. Chapters mostly 1,5k+. . . . Some facts about MC that confuse people: 1) He is a kid. A real kid and not an adult in child body how someone might think. But he has knowledge about some things. To understand what it all means read auxiliary chapter, Eternal Mind awakening explanation. 2) Amalgal is an AI. He is a program that is strictly regulated by his own creators and thus he is not some helping grandpa. He can't do much. To learn more read auxiliary chapter under category Amalgal.

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Hello to all who read this… so most likely no one… but it´s okay… really… … Aaaanyway hi, this me… yeah, I know, you don´t know me sooooo why don´t you read this story about a form of me?? No?! thought so… no… I´m not crying… maybe a little… So, the story is fun, you know ?? no, you don´t, so read this about awesome me… Please… I mean, I´m like going around transforming into monsters and summing Horror story characters as babies and trying to raise them as a good dad would do… I know, I didn´t really have any experience in parenting and stuff but I tried… still trying actually… It got better after some time… I think… So yeah, we travel around the world and into dimensions for the best home and to have fun. It´s not so easy… all around we find Monsters, beasts, and people of all races in trouble and try to help them… But… I have this nagging feeling I forgot something important… what was I supposed to do here again?? … I think some god told me… to… fight something?? Ahhhh, I shouldn’t really care now, should I?? Anyway, please read this… please… I would like to show everyone that Horror story characters are not always bad from the beginning, and it depends on how they are raised (not all, just some). Thanks… and for all who don´t… He won´t cures you or anything… maybe… HeHe… ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Author, here, This is a story I make because I just felt like it. I had the Idea for a long time now (in my head) and today (at the time I write this) I decided to just begin writing it. I still go to school, so I don´t have so much time for writing and because my native language is NOT English, I might have a few mistakes in my story… Yeah… there might be more than just a few… I would really appreciate if some of you would highlight the mistake/mistakes for me to correct it. And if someone has an idea that would go well with the story Just write a commend and I will look if some of the Ideas, coming from you all, go well with what I have planned. And I don´t think I will make a harem for my Mc But maybe for the kids when they are older.

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The Defeat of the Fairies - Hope of a new Dawn

Serendipity brings Caleb to meet Ailrees, who turns out to be a fairy and the last of her kind! Having stumbled upon a crumbling fairytale, Caleb and his closest friends join a band of merry on a quest to give the hope of a new dawn a fighting chance. The thing is... Ailrees soon realizes that her new-found friends are messed up in the head, which is quite refreshing, for the fairy has loose screws, too! On a day like every other, Caleb takes a different turn than his usual while jogging, not knowing it would turn his world upside down. There, The biker boy found a Jane Doe blacked out in the forest and unconsciously, he is drawn to the mystery of her. However, the doe turned out to be another forest-dueling being, a fairy named Ailrees, the last of her kind. Her people had been slaughtered and her home was being torn into ruins by the evil forces of the creatures of the night, who seek to cast on the land an ever-lasting winter. Struck with a crumbling fairytale, Caleb and his closest friends, Valory and Nick, join Ailrees and a handful of other magical creatures on a dangerous campaign. Greatly outnumbered and aware they needed more help, the band of merry was not set on ending the war of light and darkness, but instead, on a quest to even give the hope of a new dawn a fighting chance. They had to bring the fairies back. Back from the dead, that is! This book is filled with adventure, fun, hardships...  and romance, too!  It's got all kinds of magical creatures, such as fairies, demons, vampires, shapeshifters, unicorns ... and much more! As well as bad boys, gunslingers, bards, curses, and spells!

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0 :Auxiliary Volume
1 :Harry Potter Ark
2 :Witcher World Ark. First Steps.
3 :Witcher Ark. The War of the Two.

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Greymark
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I'm writing this review mainly to adhere couple of things for people before they started to read the book. 1) MC is a kid with some book knowledge. He is not an a_dult in kids body. Auxiliary chapter Eternal Mind Awakening explains why it is so. It is explained in the story too, but somehow there were people not understanding it. 2) Amalgal is an AI and he can do very little. Language of magic is not spells. It has nearly zero practical application, unless one learns actual spells. So he is not some helping grandpa. The story in Harry Potter ark can be a bit dark, but Witcher ark is different and more lighthearted, as MC already grew up to the level where he can't be a victim overly and the world itself help him open up to people, becoming lighter in interactions. The style of the story in witcher is more action oriented with more fun dialogs between characters. Of course there will be not so funny cases, but it is witcher for you. A synergy of lightheartedness, drama and cruelty. And love interest is still undecided. Everything is possible.

Harvald
HarvaldLv5Harvald

This story is for emos. People who want to get depressed or just like to see their mc suffer for no other reason than character building. In this case a sort of numb case that follows daddy system sorry AI. The whole ISU shebang doesn't make much sense. Yes, it is there but it doesn't really add something to the story and is more like a new background. I sometimes started skipping and then re-reading until chapter 44 but it is more like a chore then that I get any sense of enjoyment out of it. I really tried but this story is just depressing for the sake of it and later ditches into a different verse.

Ruined_Herrscher
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Ark_the_Legend
Ark_the_LegendLv11Ark_the_Legend

This book hits deep. It is such an amazing novel that really shows what life could and has been for some people. It doesn’t **** around and tells about the ****ed parts of life without the bull****. This novel is 1000% worth the read even if it is really dark and depressing through the first ark. Please read and decide for yourself while widening your horizons. - Thank you author for the amazing book!

StarWriting
StarWritingLv10StarWriting

I made it like 15 chapters, I gave your story a shot but it’s just not readable in it’s current state. I have no idea what’s happening at all. You need a better translator/beta

Debojit_Debnath
Debojit_DebnathLv2Debojit_Debnath

He was supposed to be a 80 something year old man.. not a puppy of 8 years old who has taken a liking to being petted by a girl he just met after years of being tortured.. I might puke.. wtf is going on. Like change drastic change in personalities in seconds.. and what is it with this constant guilt and all that ****. A person who has aged in soul doesn't have such intense reactions..

Conquestor
ConquestorLv4Conquestor

It's really great the character interaction the world buliding the characters growth authors know what he is doing and he is really good at it. And I really want mc and ciri as a couple, you can do it author👍👍👍😍😍😍

God_King_Heath
God_King_HeathLv4God_King_Heath

in all honesty, I like it a lot yeah it has some grammy issues but still, I like the hell out it so give it a shot. I hope it gets better with time

Xcolibur
XcoliburLv13Xcolibur

Excellent Story, This Fic has a plot and enjoyable, MC is likeable he's growing and has characters development, side characters is spot on and felt like the og, please don't drop this fic, it's the first Witcher that truly explore the world of witcher. Thank you author

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

The story is definitely getting good specially about Alan family history and not mention his bloodline powers r Badass and Romance is good too and we also learn many things in Witcher world before 1st Witcher game come out.

The_butcher
The_butcherLv4The_butcher

excellent story...loved it perfectly narrated... best fan fiction on witcher if you haven't read it, you seen nothing Loved it alot specially the characters

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

I like the story it’s has great background and I like how u make Alan not Op from beginning because it will make story boring and fights too

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DrDoom0
DrDoom0Lv5DrDoom0

Hufflepuff MC. do I need to say anything else?.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

Really good chapters. And story. I really like this story.Really good chapters. And story. I really like this story.Really good chapters. And story. I really like this story.

Tzevaot
TzevaotLv13Tzevaot

who is the main love interest ?.........

Zakaria_S
Zakaria_SLv1Zakaria_S

La storia in se non è buona è deprimente... Affrettata e confusa con una pessima qualità di scrittura ...sviluppo dei personaggi e della storia inesistente...azioni inutili e forzate dei personaggi oc ...mc ha una personalità troppo confusa che cambia di continuo...per il primo arco trama quasi inesistente... Forzata la chiusura del arco con la maledizione su fluer per tradirlo e dimenticarlo quindi costringendolo ad abbandonare tutti quelli a cui tiene per cambiare mondo... Dopo di che ho abbandonato quindi non saprei...cmq non ci sono aggiornamenti da 2 anni Google Translate The story itself is not good is depressing ... Hurried and confused with a poor quality of writing ... development of the characters and of the story non-existent ... useless and forced actions of the characters or c ... mc has a too confused personality that changes constantly ... for the first arc almost non-existent plot ... Forced the closure of the arc with the curse on fluer to betray him and forget him therefore forcing him to abandon all those he cares about to change the world ... After that I abandoned so I don't know ... cmq there have been no updates for 2 years

TheSystemFan
TheSystemFanLv5TheSystemFan

I really really really love this novel........ I wish the author will continue writing this and not drop this great piece of work..... Here's to hoping that it won't be dropped...

Killerarrow007
Killerarrow007Lv4Killerarrow007

just saying bro if you want a cold character as mc you need to apply murders and torture and if you want a sad character you need to just kill mc parents or something like that but your mc doesn't make sense he suffered all that after instead of dark mc you portrayed a light mc and also he with his powers itself he should be cold and Ruthless character but you made him a bit meak for his bg story

The_butcher
The_butcherLv4The_butcher

I don't know about some people but they should read it first.....it's awesome story Ho ark is dark but witcher world is so awesome....he almost cover everything in the novel especially that idiot bard....god so annoying but we'll done author....you perfectly narrated it

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