Akashic

So, where to start... The MC lived through harsh event and died shortly after finding happiness only to be reincarnated in another world with man eating monster... Everything good for now... I write this reviews the day the 47th chapter was updated and nothing and I did say NOTHING happened the MC obtain power ('AURA' /INNOCENCE) and has knowledge of futur events but does NOTHING to stop them or train to become stronger... He awakened his 'aura' but does nothing to train way of using it, he obtained an innocence (D Gray Man) but someone say to him to not use it and he does NOT use it even when he is used has a punching bag... The MC is a fucking abandoned boat on a turbulent ocean he does nothing except following the weather mood... He could die he would not give a ****...

I think it is about time I wrote a review for the author, as someone who has been here almost since he started publishing it and his no. 1 Power Stone supplier. Writing Quality - There honestly isn't much to reprimand the author for when it concerns the quality of his writing. I have seen him writing on the discord multiple times with a multitude of grammatical errors, yet when it comes to this novel, there is only a very few minor mistakes that can easily be overlooked. One can tell how much effort he put into his, so far, fantastic fan-fiction. Stability of Updates - The author has never let down his readers when it comes to the rate of updates, and a chapter a day is already more than what most fan-fictions manage to deliver. Story Development - So far the story has been a very pleasant read and it will hopefully continue to be. The only thing that have really bothered me throughout the novel, at least till the part where I am at (C73), is how weak the main character is. I get that one has to train to get stronger, or at least that is how it normally is, but the MC can actually purchase different abilities from his tome as far as I have understood, yet that function has yet to be put into use. Character Design - I really do not have much to say here either. I really love how the MC interacts with the other characters and his background isn't as shabby as most other fan-fictions MC's are. I will say however, that the author should refrain from adding too many OC characters or it will all end up getting very confusing at one point. As a matter of fact, I am already a bit confused due to the sudden introduction of all the OC characters. It truly felt like I suddenly got a lot of characters thrown at me. World Background - As far as the world background goes, what is there to say? It's RWBY. Naturally, there is the MC's home-world as well, but I really liked how that was portrayed. All in all, I hope the author keeps up his work and that it is someday further recognized and rises in the popularity rankings.

First review at chapter 47: Nothing happened Second review (Now) at CHAPTER 90: NOTHING HAPPENED (Except 1 Lemon chapter, not bad for a first time writing one) So while I love your novel, dear author Writing Qualities: 5⭐ except some errors here and there nothing to say it's good Stability of updating: 5⭐ 1 chapter a day till this day except when author got RL problem Story Development: 1⭐You have a MC with interesting power but you don't use or train them, you introduced a system like 'Akashic Tome' but you didn't develop it, same with Ashe you didn't devez her story too much we don't see her except for the occasional joke about Arth and his relationship with girl... Characters Design: 3⭐ you could have a good MC but you destroy him with the same joke again and again, one time is funny second is not third and next are just humiliating for the MC and boring for us, like I said in the first review MC doesn't train even though he know part of the plot but at the time (Ch 47) it could be excused by the fact that the MC didn't have a real target on him but now he know Salem is interested in him but still does nothing... He doesn't even explore the ability/function of his tome.... World Background: 5⭐ It's a FanFiction so we can't really say it's bad except if you don't like the world he his currently in.

The story was good at first but it slowly gets too repetitive. I feel like I've been reading fillers after fillers instead of a story. Every chapter seems to be more of the same which makes it really hard to continue reading. I even force myself to continue reading in hopes that it gets better but even after 50 chapters, I don't see any changes, just more of the same.

Slightly Above average overall like the other reviews I find some of this to be great.......filler that is high quality filler but still filler plot wise absolutely nothing has happened of any real importance that actually made a change to the story and the changes that do happen don't do anything. One bad point now a good point the relationship development is amazing. Bad point the relationship between him and any woman in general is awful when it comes to women the mc is a copy and paste spineless mc you find everywhere on here if they say something and they have tits they are right you are wrong you should apologise it is actually so bad that if someone told me "Cardin goes through surgery and gets tits so the mc immediately apologized to him turned around bent over dropped his pants and let Cardin plow him in front of the whole school." I couldn't disagree because it's possible THAT'S how bad it is Good point the mc has an interesting backstory that come with mental problems that the author isn't afraid to let show Bad point the moments where it affects him are really weird his trauma triggers in a crowd but not when he is in a literal torture machine Good point he has really interesting powers Bad point never explores them and has used them like twice Good point has a cool magic book Bad point do I even have to say? Never uses it This all from chapter 71 right as coco forces him to go to an interview he doesn't want to go to for good reason but hey she has tits! (I will continue to read and will change this based on what happens..... until I finally give up hope on this going anywhere good.)

This story is real good... thats all I got to say. It doesn’t have many spelling errors if any, I at least haven't seen any. The story is going smoothly and I like how he isn't OP right away. My only nitpick is that I feel like he talks about his past a little to much. I mean the guy is like “I don't wanna talk about it...” then like the very next chapter he talks about it. Its a little weird but other than that this book is great.

is there a proper reason why our mc is stupid and doesn't even think about training his powers or develop any of his abilities and the system? I don't get it, it feels so hollow that it's not worth reading

A very interesting story if not for the depressingly trashy lore of the mc plus too much depression, every causes a little flashback or sadness. It's like the mc is begging to be loved at first it was fine but after a few chapters it gets annoying and I mean very annoying. If not for the fact the book is utterly and disgustingly depressing I would have continued.

So when is he going to start using his powers over life and death. Shouldn't he have instinctive control over death since he was causing it his entire life.

Are you going to actually reveal anything important about his tome to ozpin's group are you? Since ozpin will simply try to use him as a weapon agains5 salem

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This is such an amazing novel, in my book its at the top of the list including enlion's novel...so thats a very high standard. The story, development of characters and progression the emotions are very subtle and amazing really you should continue this novel, you have my full support.

Really love this book, too bad author has stopped working on it 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Needs more chapters , if you want to add more lemon scenes and pregnancy go ahead plenty of people will read it just don't add a lemon scene for every other chapter maybe one or two every 10 chapters or more Is good but mc has a willing harem he cannot have sex with 3 and not expect to leave others hanging keep up the hard work wish you would continue this novel

It's so addicting. And the storyline 💯. I like how everything fits well together. If ur looking for a book with few 🤤 scenes, thts not to graphic but on the safe side and not all that boring this is it. I'll neva ht bored

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Probably the best RWBY fanfic I’ve read so far. Characters are all written and executed nicely and the MC also has a nice progression ark. The H scenes and character interactions are great as well.

It's hard to find a RWBY story and even harder to find a good one even when it's not just RWBY. You good sir 👌👌👌. I can not wait to see how far you go with this story but I very well hope that it goes as far as no further then ENDLESS PATH That is my hope and wish of this story 🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉🍉