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A Immortals Eden

Edens, a type of mysterious spirits who thrive and made by ones emotion, ideas, conflict, fear and greatness. No one knows how they existed, they break the law of physics and can give a human abilities; one can gain a Eden through the way they existed, but they mainly go to people who show off strong emotion. Once a Eden choices you, you cannot reject it; your body will succumb to the Eden and you will gain it's abilities. Edens can be seen by the naked eye if they're very close, but when you become a host of it you will forever be blind to the other Edens, to be "blind" to other Edens means that you can only bond with one of them; you simply will not be able to bond with other ones after, you'll only be able to be with the Eden who chose you. Each Eden looks very different, and the powers you gain from them are diverse; it's quite literally a "gift or curse". This story will be about a teen going through a huge amount of struggle, and it will show how he went through everything; He gains a mysterious Eden, he calls his Eden a "curse" because the ability he gained from it was immortality. How will he fight his battles? How will he withstand his own thoughts? Is his Eden truly a gift? How will he cope with the fact that he's in immortal? Read how a 17 year old boy changes, and understand his depressing origins.

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5 Chs

The 5 Great Evils? (ch.3)

Jäger started to grin, as the force from her power slams his head so hard that it created a big crator on the ground, he said to her "You've lost"

Rosa was shocked that he said this due to the fact that she has the advantage, "Oh? I lost, you're the one who's going to die here, i'm not sure what tricks you've been doing until now, but you'll die here."

Right after she said that, she planned to inflict the finale blow; she said "Grau No Leben", right after she said that Jäger quickly got up and took her arm while transitioning into a Hane goshi gaeshi throw, for some reason her power didn't activate

A Hane goshi gaeshi throw is a move that consists of lifting up the opponent's hips and legs and throwing him in a sudden motion.

She was thrown to the ground so hard that it made her gasp for air, Jäger quicky backed away to gain some distance, and then he started running away very fast; he was planning for an escape

Rosa got up as fast as she could and ran to him, she was right behind Jäger desperately chasing him down; "COME BACK HERE YOU COWARD, THIS FIGHT ISN'T OVER; SUBMIT ALREADY AND JUST DIE"

As Jäger was running he replied "You really are stupid aren't you? You've already killed me more than once, why are you so dense; I'M IMMORTAL, I have absolutely no choice but to live, you've blundered very hard, the loss is completely your fault, accept defeat with dignity"

She replied to him "I don't believe it there's no way you're 'immortal', how did you even negate Grau No Leben? I made sure I chanted the words perfectly"

Jäger replied to her, "You don't even know the weakness to your own POWER? Everytime you chant your ability your Eden has to make a cry for it to work, I've noticed this because everytime you chanted your ability the eden started crying; so I made a move on you before your eden even had a chance to cry out. Also another flaw in your ability is the defense, actually no, it's the way you used the ability; you only practiced your offensive capabilities it seems like, you have no defensive techniques whatsoever, in theory I shouldn't even be able to grab or even touch you if you used your "WEIßES LOUCH" in a defensive way instead of trying to go full offense; your cockiness and dense mind led to your loss, ACCEPT YOUR LOSS."

Rosa had a sad expression on her face, she was disappointed in herself; she said thought to herself "How could I have been bested by him? If what he said was true, he doesn't have any abilities that can actually damage someone to the point of death, he simply used marital arts on me; if I can't even defeat someone like him what's the point of me fighting anymore, I'm a disgrace to the Zerstörers"

She started to slow down and eventually just stopped chasing him, she felt worthless and weak; she fought somone with normal human strength, no powerful abilities, no overpowered tools or weapons, she simply got outsmarted in midst of battle.

Jäger kept on running and running and running... He ran miles 4 miles away without stopping once, it was still raining as it was before, he started to slow down stopped when he saw a tree; he slowly walked up to the tree and sat next to it

As soon as he at down Lily popped out of nowhere, Jäger was searching through his pockets and said "Damn it where did it go? I need it..... I need it.... I need it... Please.... I NEED IT!!!!!!!!!!!", Jäger punched the tree with the back of his fist, the bark cut the side of his knuckle and it started to bleed a little; he sighed and looked up at the teee branches

Lily sat right next to him, it started to look at his arms, and yet again it started to cry silently; Jäger said to Lily "you really cry too much, I don't understand why you keep crying, I'm the one who should be crying but here I am, just contemplating about my life"

After Jäger said that to Lily, he said to himself "What should I do with my life now, I've been chasing my death for a while now, it's so far yet so close; my depression is like another being inside of me. it's telling me that my fixation of death is like a bunny, the more I chase after it the further it will go; I can't reach anything that I chase after."

Jägers heart started racing, he felt something was watching him; he put his hands on his face and started crying while saying "What should I do", as he said that he saw a frog with a black and white tint, it had human teeth and could make human facial expressions, it also had wings; it was flying right in front of Jäger

The frog replied "Heheheheheh maybe you should kill yourself AHAHAA"

When the frog said that, Jäger said to himself "No, that's too simplistic, it's not that easy; i've been running in circles for way too long"

The frog replied "when are you going to learn Jäger, people will never care for you while you're alive; they'll only care if you die, oh....OH RIGHT you're immortal SO NO PERSON WILL EVER CARE FOR YOU AHAHAHAHAA"

Jäger started to question his own existence, he didn't even cry, he didn't yell, he didn't utter a word; he simply felt numb and lost

The frog had a mischievous grin on his face, he was watching Jägers suffering and.... Didn't enjoy it? The started fading slowly out of existence

Lily started to write something again, he looked down at what Lily wrote, he started to think about what Lily had said; he'll keep these words at the back of his head

What Lily wrote was "Carve your mind into a shield, so when the weak minded try to combat you with their dull swords; you will remain unfazed."

Jäger replied to Lily saying "I'll take your advice, but I still absolutely hate you, and I wish i've never met you, I would've finally been at peace if you didn't forcefully bond with me"

Right after he said that Lily wrote something else on the floor "Follow me, I want to give you something, it may be a dangerous journey but it'll be completely worth it; I will help you achieve many things and make it so you can combat anyone and anytime, you seemed to have alot of fun when you're fighting"

Jäger read what Lily wrote and responded, "I don't have 'fun' fighting, but I do admit it does make me feel alive, I used to train with my grandpa alot before he passed away; he taught me how to use various swords, and taught me numerous marital arts, when I fight, it reminded me of those times"

Lily started to jump up and down and was starting to walk away from the tree, Jäger got up and away from the tree and started following Lily, he didn't know where it was trying to take him but he went anyways

As Jäger was walking with Lily he felt a sense of relief, they kept on walking in a directly straight path for a couple of hours until they saw an ancient ruins; it looked it's been through many wars, there was broken peices of stone everywhere from the houses and pillars, there was moss growing on some of the stone and mushrooms; there was even a few Edens around as well, he saw two of them walk into the ruins; for some reason the Edens looked very blury and hard to see, but Jäger could feel their sadness, it's like they've lost something very close to them, it's like they're grieving

Lily started pointing at something in the ruins, Jäger took a closer look and felt something with powerful spirit energy

"Uhh Lily? What exactly is going on here, this doesn't feel right and i'm confused on what we're doing here, is the thing I sense a malevolent tool?"

A malevolent tool is a extremely rare type of weapon or object that was made by killing millions of people and binding the soul in the object, the malevolent tools were used by the 5 great evils; their names were Diablo the ruler of depraved heaven, Vigil the high king, Devilman Aku and Gunther the ghost of Oiwa

These people were named "the 5 great evils" due to the mass genocides they did to human beings, these 5 people were so greedy for power that they supposedly killed anyone that stood in their way and took over countries and Kingdoms.

They were called the 5 great evils but they actually never worked together or liked each other, if anything they actually despised each other.

And the reason why they were so strong is because they were unchained, humans usually have locks on their soul; when someone is "unchained" they've successfully took those locks off their soul, this makes them extremely strong compared to a normal human being

Unchained people can easily go against people who've bonded with an Eden and can even win against them, but to become "unchained" you have to go through alot of hardships, and most people don't even get it in their lifetime; for the rare few who became unchained they randomly got it through the heat of battle, so researchers believed that you have to be born with weaker spirit binds to actually even have the possibility to become unchained.

There's also increasingly more and more humans who are able to use "ki" which is simply their life force. Although it is easier to use ki if you're unchained, non unchained people can also use ki but it's harder.

People who use ki tend can go toe to toe with Eden users and unchained people; ki users can use ki to enhance their speed and physical power greatly, they can even use ki to increase their endurance, but the ki amount is reflected upon your life force, because it IS your life force, so if you run out of ki it's game over.....You die.

There are many mysteries on ki techniques and what you can do with ki, but as time goes by more and more info is found out about it.

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*To be continued*

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