A Dragon's Journey in Danmachi

Dragon lad gets dragged to Danmachi and Danmachi wasn't ready. MC is from a "cultivation" world and it shows in some of his comments. His comments, the Danmachi characters aren't acting like that. MC has both pride and a backbone which is shockingly rare, even with a dragon mc. Author has some commissioned art for the MC and it looks very nice, all in all I'm excited to see where the story goes.

Hi everyone. It has been a little more than a week since the novel was posted, and I have to say, many people already held plenty of questions to ask me regarding my novel and the general directions of it, so here I am. A little Q & A with the most asked questions up until now. Q - Will my novel follow Chinese fiction or grow to become some Chinese tale? A - My novel will not adhere to such a style. Although it may seem like that as there are SOME elements pointing to that, you can rest assured. My heart is not tainted with dumb young masters or MC always being the strongest Gary Stu of this planet. Evidence could be the first few chapters, as for those who know what happened, Ryuu didn't have it that easy. To give it a final reply, please do not think I'll follow any specific fiction. My novel is a mix of many elements together I loved from all these different styles and even if it can point to one particular style like it has been doing until now, you can rest assured it won't become a Chinese tale at all. Q - Will you make it a Harem? A - I don't know. It has been overused a bit too much in Danmachi to have all the girls at the MC's feet, though Ryuu has already been shown to not give his 'affections' to just anyone. The interaction between Tiona and Ryuu is just a result of many things and probably won't be repeated for any other girl. Though I won't shamelessly promise anything. Please, read this without too much prejudice, as I really am not focusing on romance. The plot I have in mind is too grand to be shackled by something so small and common you'd see in any other Danmachi fanfic...! (Though Tiona has a special place in my small heart, she is already confirmed to be Ryuu's partner at this point, no matter what.) Q - What is the direction of your novel? A - [SPOILERS] This question is an interesting one. Ultimately, I would like to completely clean up the Danmachi World. I do not know how many chapters that will take, but think clearly about the concept of "Apocalypse" and "Disaster" as they will be mentioned multiple times in my novel and there are special reasons for that. Some of you may already have connected the dots as from the very first chapters, it was implied that a disaster could befall the Danmachi World, I am just confirming your assumptions... I hope these provide enough information for you to decide whether this novel is something you'd like to read… If it's not your cup of tea, you can tell me why, as that would help me out too... Thank you for reading.

I have not read past 10 chapters but I can say for sure that the story isn't going to get better due to the MC character being a dumb and arrogant perk like as if the world owes. - He is disrespectful to literal god for what, just stupid pride that has nothing to back it up. Dragons are meant to be WISE and strong with pride to their power and knowledge not without any reason. A Chinese MC has at least some boundaries to not cross due to their brain but not in this novel. - The author changes some characters personalities, I would be OK if this was an AU but nope. - Good luck with your novel and I don't mind if you delete this review as I just wrote for other readers.

Well, to each his own. I chose my path, you chose the way of the hero. And they found you amusing for a while, the people of this city. But the one thing they love more than a hero is to see a hero fail, fall, die trying. In spite of everything you've done for them, eventually they will hate you. Why bother? <- Green Goblin You can died like Hero or you living long become vilian “You may come to regret trying to manipulate me.” – Ayanokouji Kiyotaka

Due to its setting, it seems like a Chinese tale. The story goes that the dragon boy regains his strength, acting proud and powerful. his story is not so bad It's just that I'm not attracted to the direction it's going.

At first the story is fine and all, he writes well and the updates are constant, but the character is of the Dargonian race more specifically a Dragon, a being that is supposed to be of great power, a being of immense power, brushing or leaving behind some gods, Gods! But in this story, The MC is less than a dragon, he doesn't have the pride of a dragon nor the strength of one, he was almost killed in his first encounters in the world, and the one who almost killed him was a human and in one blow, that's why I leave him.

The setting is kind of wonky, his weird power level and his attitude. Would have been a lot easier to write it off as a pure reincarnation starting back as level 1 with some exclusive xanxia perks trees.

All around this just isn’t good at all and I could go on and on writing paragraph after paragraph complaining about why this isn’t good but I’m not going to do that if you want to know why it’s not good go ahead and read it But if I were to summarize this is basically a amateur’s amateur wish fulfillment fanfic with forced plot points a idiotic main character and a story that is going nowhere so for me this wasn’t worth the time I wasted on it Take from that what you will but I’ve said my peace

Have you come for a dragons adventure in your favourite anime dungeon? How about story about a draaaagon among humans with typical young master attitude? Here you go: unreasonable arrogance, annoying tropes (why everyone go to Hestia familia? why every anime event is repeated?), taunting everyone, being very super smart (in authors point of perspective) and other examples of shameful behaviour. The core fault of the whole story is authors perspective - he is highlighting his MC as someone important and powerful, charming, beautiful and other complimentary things, but ... Never ever gives a reason - why is that? Because he was a dragon somewhere else? But now he is not. So why?.. Why he never used any of that to his advantage? Is he stronger? Nope. Is he smart? Gods, no, he is so dumb. Is he cunning? As baked potato. Is he lucky? Well, plot armour is here. If your life has not enough frustration as it is right now, read the novel and get annoyed super fast!

I hardly ever give a fanfic such a low score and even more rarely do I do so in Chapter 6, but the MC's personality is pretty bad. He reminds me of when I was 6 and punching the other kids for something like calling me an idiot or jumping in the cafeteria line. I really thought it was stupid for the MC to get angry and blame Hermes for using his soul to pressure the MC when the MC invaded Hermes' God realm, even accidentally. It was like someone breaking into a house and getting mad at the owner who pointed a gun at the intruder and asked who he was or called the police as if it was his right to break into the house, even if by accident, and the owner should just ignore it. the invader. Even more ridiculous is how after Bete was rude to order the MC to get out of front of a door he decided to punch Bete and destroy a house in the process so Loki apologized to the MC and gave a potion to heal the hand that the MC injured with the punch. I just don't know what to say about it, this fanfic is too surreal, even Yun Che wasn't that ridiculous in Against the gods.

As I sit down to write about this incredible novel, I am filled with a sense of awe and wonder at the power of literature to transport us to other worlds and open our minds to new possibilities. From the very first page, I was captivated by the rich, vivid descriptions and the compelling characters who inhabit this story. The plot is complex and intricate, weaving together elements of mystery, adventure, and romance in a way that kept me thoroughly engaged and on the edge of my seat. As I delved deeper into the novel, I found myself completely absorbed in the world it created, lost in its intricate details and nuanced characters. Each chapter felt like a journey into a new realm, filled with unexpected twists and turns that kept me guessing until the very end. Truly moving and thought-provoking. It made me consider my own life and relationships in a new light, and helped me to see the world in a different way. Overall, this novel was a truly transformative experience, one that I will carry with me long after I have finished reading it. It's the kind of novel that stays with you, resonating in your thoughts and feelings long after you have turned the last page. If you are a reader who craves depth, complexity, and a truly immersive reading experience, then I highly recommend giving this novel a try. It is, without a doubt, one of the most extraordinary and moving works of fiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading.

Overly dramatic , not fun to read , too much arrogance on MC and just not impressive or interesting to read. The author tried to make the opening chapters bit to dramatic. I mean i read like 20 ish chapters and i cringe due to too much drama and stuff. The interesting part which is supposed to be dungeon exploration or interactions with the Danmachi characters are not fun to read in this fic.

no need to say anything. This novel is good.

In chapter 56 a new mc gets added with op cheats and that had ruined the entire story if you are here for a story with only one Mc you are out of luck and you will be wasting your time real shame this story was good until that moment that's why I gave it 3 stars

Got to the chapter checkmate and couldn't cope with the mc and the story as a whole. It's well written but the story is poor. The whole arc of him getting owned by ais then him going around to others for support to face slap loki is just super cringe.

Writing Quality: Absolutely stellar! The paragraphs are digestible and easy to read, the grammar is near flawless, and the vocabulary is diverse! Updates: Very consistent. At least a chapter each day! Story Development: Good development thus far! The plot progresses at a nice pace without falling into the pit of "filler" scenes and whatnot where many other novels have. Character Design: Fantastic design! As far as I could tell, the characters follow their defined personalities from the original very well! Ryuu is awesome, the arrogance is hilarious! World Background: As someone that's watched Danmachi before, there isn't much for the author to add on. Though I am curious to see Ryuu's place of origin! Overall, the novel is worth reading and following, hands down. I'd love to see how the story unfolds from this point on.

Hope author doesn’t drop there are a couple of good Danmachi ff on here but most are horrible. Atleast until 150 and hopefully 200 chapters would be great

Not my style of Mc but it is really good and well written hope the author continues it

This novel is not for me. The mc is like a world of very pure cultivation but his race makes him very arrogant (this reminds me of late chinese mc and young master). I don't know how the author manages a very strong character (it looks like novels without a sense of the system or fulfillment of desire). These novels will be decent if they don't have a harem and if they have 2 to 4 heroines at most. If you want to read it and you are new to the world it will be decent to read and if you are a veteran like me it depends on what you have read. This novel would qualify 5 out of 10 if it does not have a harem 5.5

the novel is well executed. The Protagonist is strong without needing a System to back it up, which is...different from any danmachi Fanfic I've ever read.