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TaragormLv11yr
2023-01-03 08:56

Got to the chapter checkmate and couldn't cope with the mc and the story as a whole. It's well written but the story is poor. The whole arc of him getting owned by ais then him going around to others for support to face slap loki is just super cringe.

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LunaSkylair
LunaSkylairAuthor

thanks for your honest review, I'm sorry it was not to your tastes. May you find a novel you can like!

Onxio
OnxioLv5

Wait wait wait..... I'm reading reviews and I'm getting confused So mc is from a Cultivation world so if assume he lived for like hundreds of thousands of years he should be like the BEST at technique and combat Now MC if he's from a world like that should be able to best opponents who aren't like several realms above him like Ais with patience and skill unless he's not a true China man

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LunaSkylair
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Hi everyone. It has been a little more than a week since the novel was posted, and I have to say, many people already held plenty of questions to ask me regarding my novel and the general directions of it, so here I am. A little Q & A with the most asked questions up until now. Q - Will my novel follow Chinese fiction or grow to become some Chinese tale? A - My novel will not adhere to such a style. Although it may seem like that as there are SOME elements pointing to that, you can rest assured. My heart is not tainted with dumb young masters or MC always being the strongest Gary Stu of this planet. Evidence could be the first few chapters, as for those who know what happened, Ryuu didn't have it that easy. To give it a final reply, please do not think I'll follow any specific fiction. My novel is a mix of many elements together I loved from all these different styles and even if it can point to one particular style like it has been doing until now, you can rest assured it won't become a Chinese tale at all. Q - Will you make it a Harem? A - I don't know. It has been overused a bit too much in Danmachi to have all the girls at the MC's feet, though Ryuu has already been shown to not give his 'affections' to just anyone. The interaction between Tiona and Ryuu is just a result of many things and probably won't be repeated for any other girl. Though I won't shamelessly promise anything. Please, read this without too much prejudice, as I really am not focusing on romance. The plot I have in mind is too grand to be shackled by something so small and common you'd see in any other Danmachi fanfic...! (Though Tiona has a special place in my small heart, she is already confirmed to be Ryuu's partner at this point, no matter what.) Q - What is the direction of your novel? A - [SPOILERS] This question is an interesting one. Ultimately, I would like to completely clean up the Danmachi World. I do not know how many chapters that will take, but think clearly about the concept of "Apocalypse" and "Disaster" as they will be mentioned multiple times in my novel and there are special reasons for that. Some of you may already have connected the dots as from the very first chapters, it was implied that a disaster could befall the Danmachi World, I am just confirming your assumptions... I hope these provide enough information for you to decide whether this novel is something you'd like to read… If it's not your cup of tea, you can tell me why, as that would help me out too... Thank you for reading.

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