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Characters, especially Carlene are very likeable! There's some grammatical errors, like in the beginning of the synopsis. But it's a great story overall! It's not that fast paced but it's not that slow either, which makes it more interesting. I didn't finish because of school works, though I'll come back to read more!

Sorry....very sorry. once i started reading i forgot everything. The story just hooked me in the plot. Starting with the most typical contract marriage then going through all these mystery i never thought this will be so interesting. One thing for sure i just became your fan.

I'll be honest personally I'm not a fan of romance novels but the more I read the more interesting it got for me so by chapter 10 I really started to enjoy it so it's a great novel I highly recommend giving it a read!

Read the first few chaps and I found it be a Good read!! The events are nice though some grammar can be improved . Overall the reading and flow is fine though! What's the difference with the other one of the same title by the way?

Really love how all characters are already been developed as each chapters are released. A bit of Grammatical errors that can be corrected. love Your book so much author

this book is a great read, some grammatical errors but still a great read, looking for to reading it all

It is pretty obvious since the beginning that there are certain characters that are supposed to be liked and disliked, but besides that, I like the story line. I think that, while it can get messy at times there isn't anything bad about it. Son far, very good~

The story flows fluidly, updates are stable and writing style is consistent. There are a few errors but not enough to take away the interest. All in all, it is a good read.

Characters are quite likable. Few grammatical and spelling errors can easily be remedied. The story progresses quite nicely. Keep up the good work!!!

Nice showing world background nicely .... I was like ....wanna read more...The pain of a random women...I guess will be nicely explained in this ..... that's what stories are about...the lesson

Love the twins especially Carmela, hope I got her name right. She is so cool. The ML, Zamien is kind of a jerk. I hope as the story unfolds I get to see his character growth. looking forward to that. The POV switching was confusing at the beginning but as I read further i got use to it. The author's writing style is unique and I kind of like it. over all it a great story. love the pacing. Good Job author

I really liked the plot of the story. The characters too are captivating. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Great work author 👍

I really liked the starting cuz twins seem like a cool, popular duo😎 I like how you have written story in a POV way i think that makes more interesting based in it's concept Synopsis is really funny too I started laughing when I read it 😂 Nice job author

when I saw the scene in the shopping mall, I fell in love with her.. she is cool!!! i am eager to know what is going to happen later.. keep up with the good plot.. fighting

Intersting start. The synopsis really caught my eye. World building was also good. I haven't finished reading this book but it is very recommended!! Check it out.

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The story is great, little to know grammatical error is great, the concept is great and the dialogues very easy to understand[img=recommend]

Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.

I might have read a different (probably older) version of your work of the same title which was only 11 chapters. So let me redeem myself. I've read until the latest chapter and I would say the more you read, the more you get hooked into the story. It started from “okay” to “Dang, that's wild”. As for the grammatical errors which is the omission of both a few punctuations and capitalization of the first letter of some words, they do need improvement but isn't completely necessary as the story compensates for it. Job well done author-sama💛

One after another things keep happening . Pacing is well and the desire to know the reason 'why the f... is this happening' keeps you reading more n more. By each chapter the NEED to know the reason grows. This man better have a valid reason or gets equally tormented like the FL.