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HeatherReader
HeatherReaderLv121yr
2023-05-18 07:36

Read the first few chaps and I found it be a Good read!! The events are nice though some grammar can be improved . Overall the reading and flow is fine though! What's the difference with the other one of the same title by the way?

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lo_rezi
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55 Chs

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lo_rezi
lo_reziAuthor

actually I'm entering this one into the WSA contest and this one has more improved and detailed chapters than the first one I'll also change the other ones title to prevent confusion

1yr
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Drei05
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Characters, especially Carlene are very likeable! There's some grammatical errors, like in the beginning of the synopsis. But it's a great story overall! It's not that fast paced but it's not that slow either, which makes it more interesting. I didn't finish because of school works, though I'll come back to read more!

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Sweet_xiyue
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Sorry....very sorry. once i started reading i forgot everything. The story just hooked me in the plot. Starting with the most typical contract marriage then going through all these mystery i never thought this will be so interesting. One thing for sure i just became your fan.

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DRACULAVONDEATH
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I'll be honest personally I'm not a fan of romance novels but the more I read the more interesting it got for me so by chapter 10 I really started to enjoy it so it's a great novel I highly recommend giving it a read!

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HeartzDiary
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Really love how all characters are already been developed as each chapters are released. A bit of Grammatical errors that can be corrected. love Your book so much author

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Dreamer_Angel
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this book is a great read, some grammatical errors but still a great read, looking for to reading it all

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Idyllic_Scribe
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It is pretty obvious since the beginning that there are certain characters that are supposed to be liked and disliked, but besides that, I like the story line. I think that, while it can get messy at times there isn't anything bad about it. Son far, very good~

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Fallency
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The story flows fluidly, updates are stable and writing style is consistent. There are a few errors but not enough to take away the interest. All in all, it is a good read.

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PerditaTritonia
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Characters are quite likable. Few grammatical and spelling errors can easily be remedied. The story progresses quite nicely. Keep up the good work!!!

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Ink_Quanta
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Nice showing world background nicely .... I was like ....wanna read more...The pain of a random women...I guess will be nicely explained in this ..... that's what stories are about...the lesson

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