[QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS

Name: [QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS
Rating: 4.51 (18 reviews)
Author: Carciphones_02

作者: Carciphones_02

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概要

After a long torturous day of being trapped in the dark, our protagonist finally got the chance of getting away from her nightmare. That is by becoming the host of too much of a "reliable system" that always gives her weird roles which almost got her failed in every world she goes. Viollete: "System... what is my main mission?" System : [Save The Villainess] Viollete: "Then why can't you give me better roles so I can help the Villainess, better!!??" ------- System: [Hey, Do you remember your main mission?] Viollete: "Save The Villainess" System: [Then why are you acting like a matchmaker and make other people do your works!!!???] This is the story of Violette, as she is working hard to save the villainess in each mission worlds, meeting new friends, and somehow making changes in the systemic worlds. This story has GL or Shoujo ai. It's pretty light so no R-18 or R-16. Also, the Main character has no love interest. [WE DON'T TALK ABOUT FIRST WORLD. THAT WAS TWO YEARS AGO] Also!!!! I draw the cover myself!!!!!! I did my best for a whole night!!! praise me!!

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Chapter 1Woke up with a system

Fate.

I believe, everything that has been happening to me is fate.

Yeah.. that is right, fate. I should not be angry with my fate.

Even though fate is the one who made me this way despite everything I had done for those people, after all the help I give, all the blood and tears I pour to protect... Fate trapped me in here.

In the dark and empty space with no sound. This place is so quiet. There is no sound, not even my voice. I screamed yet no sound is produced. I can't even move my body. I don't know how to feel but I do know one thing.

"I'm not dead yet ".

Isn't that unfair...? I fought for others, to protects others yet in the end, this is what I got.

Trapped alone in this dark place I called prison. I want to die yet what trapped inside this place is not my body, but my soul. My body has long perished but, why am I not dead yet?

"Easy"

The body and soul are two different things. A body is nothing but a vessel for a soul to reside in. A soul is what keeps a person alive. Losing one soul is the true death while losing a body is like a hermit crab losing its shell. The time it takes is to die is longer. Just like a soul will disappear after some time before death comes in.

"Imagine, trapped in a dark space. You can see nothing, hear nothing, voice nothing, and can't move any part of your body."

"you can only wait and pray... for a miracle or mercy from the unknown..." with this thought in mind, I wait and wait and wait... losing all sense of time while being alone in the dark.

Until one day,

[HIGH-GRADE SOUL ACQUIRED]

For the first time in a very long time...

[SOUL CONDITION... FIRST CLASS]

I heard a robot sounding sound. I feel excited. It's been so long and finally... finally! something is happening!!

[REGISTERING SOUL AS THE NEW HOST]

I----------------------- I

I [DO YOU ACCEPT?] I

I [YES] [NO] I

I----------------------- I

A blue screen suddenly pops up in front of me. At first, I feel confused because, for the first time, I can see something else from the endless darkness. I realized that I can finally move my soul form. I move closer toward the screen as I stare at what's written on it.

"If I accept this offer? will this endless torture stop?" I asked in a worried tone.

I wait for a few moments but no answer came up. I start to look around me to search for anything like clues or any changes but only darkness can be seen as far as my eyes can see. Well... except for the screen in front of me.

I put a hand under my chin and start thinking of a decision. "....what should I choose?" I asked myself that question repeatedly.

I focus my attention on the blue screen again.

It's not like I will lose anything if I choose to accept this offer. If by accepting can stop my suffering, I can finally leave this dark and lonely place.

" I accept " without hesitation, I agree with the offer.

After that, the [YES] bracket blinked twice and the screen disappeared and darkness returned.

I wait for any change to happen. I look around the dark space again. Searching for anything different but, after what felt like a long time, nothing happened.

"What...what's happening?" I glance left and right. " Nothing happened !!?? " I can feel my soul is trembling as I glance everywhere around me.

" How long do I have to wait again and suffer this endless torture? " I feel cold just thinking about it. Just when I finally see some changes...

" W..what would happen if I choose no... will I die!!? " I scream loudly as I could.

"Well If by picking no will make me stop suffering than I'd rather choose no!!" I shout in desperation as panic overtook my mind.

Just as I was about to give up, the same voice from before returns.

[SOUL HAS FINISHED REGISTERING]...

"What now??" I was shocked by the sudden notification.

[WELCOME NEW HOST !!!]

As the robotic voice said that, my soul is being sucked into a vortex of Black Holes.

"Wha-" I tried to reach out for anything to hold on despite knowing it was impossible. The black hole violently sucking my soul from behind not giving me any chance to escape.

"-at is going OOOooonnn!!!??? " I close my eyes tightly as my soul is engulfed in darkness.

...

[WELCOME HOST!! AND CONGRATULATIONS FOR BEING CHOSEN AS THE NEW HOST. I AM YOUR SYSTEM THAT WILL HELP YOU IN ALL YOUR MISSION AND DECISION INCLUDING ANSWERING ALL YOUR QUESTION REGARDING YOUR ROLE AND DUTY]

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Something that you guys should know about me and this book3 years ago

卷 1

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First World With A "Reliable System"4 years ago

The Ball Is Getting On My Nerves4 years ago

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The Infuriating Plot4 years ago

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This is unexpected3 years ago

Demon King3 years ago

Third Male Lead3 years ago

Her Mission3 years ago

Special Case3 years ago

Bad Luck3 years ago

Her question3 years ago

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All is here3 years ago

Damian Ford3 years ago

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Body3 years ago

I promise you3 years ago

Spying and Love3 years ago

Hidden Plot points3 years ago

Saving Her3 years ago

Explaining3 years ago

Single is fine3 years ago

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Nightclub3 years ago

Revenge3 years ago

Pair of Bickering Dogs3 years ago

Almost there3 years ago

Talking with Alice3 years ago

Turning Point3 years ago

The end is near3 years ago

The End of the First World3 years ago

The Second World- Werewolf Everywhere3 years ago

Rei the Cannon fodder2 years ago

Dealing with the first crisis2 years ago

Big Baby2 years ago

Plot and Plan2 years ago

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The Villainess2 years ago

(Extra story+Author's Note)2 years ago

The Queen7 months ago

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Carciphones_02作者

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BaeVidaLv15

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The very first chapter just had me laughing, and I feel like first chapters are really important the same way first impressions are. The twist of the AI system is pretty refreshing for a transmigration novel, and something I didn't really expect. Its really good already, and I'm hoping you release more chapters soon!

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How curious... Would recommend to fans of the genre. Grammar has minimal errors, mainly minor spacing issues and othe negligible stuff so don't worry too much. Prose and dialogue flows naturally, making for comfortable reading. Plot is something fairly interesting, piquing my curiosity more than any other stuff I've read so far here. I'll be watching, Author. Keep on writing 👍

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SnowinLv3

Okay, so the first chapter/prologue is very well written. It catches my attention and leaves me thinking "Hmmm.. What's going to happen." I personally don't like system type novels, mainly because I think they are all the same and leave no uniqueness between the other. However, the interactions between the main character and the robot made me want to keep reading more, and more, and more. It was funny, entertaining, and interesting. It really showed the personalities of both, (if a robot can have a personality haha) As far as the writing: Overall pretty good, very minimal grammatical errors, but English isn't my first language either, so reading through this gave no problems what so ever. The only thing I might add is I would love to see some more scene/environment descriptions. There were parts where I understood what was happening, but I had no picture in my head of what I'm looking at. Once again, take all of this from an *******'s opinion, (Me) So I'm just giving my personal thoughts. All in all, great stuff, you got me on board!

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