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i liked the intro of the novel how it started with a tragic scene and how it affected the MC life. the action is great , i like the suspense that the author creates in every paragraph it gives me game of thrones vibes i hope the author keep udating it wonderful work just keep updating
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters but one thing please post 2 times a day if you don't want your novel to flop
i Will now reveiw this novel again because i feel the author needs to know this i have already wrote an sugar coated review but this is for the author , the writing is superb not many mistakes were there the story and the plot twist are cool and interesting but the problem is in updates, if the author could update the novel twice a day it may get enough exposure to more readers and may become a hit but If the author kept updating like 2 times a week only sorry but you'll eventually have to drop the novel because of no readers
this way a thrilling ride, woah needs more exposure
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 200 chapters
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters
I enjoyed the story well done author character has depth, pacing is good, no glaring mistakes keep posting and do not give up. Let's hit 100 chapters