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2024-09-07 20:45

Nice story, I like the pacing and the first chapter really seems very exciting. I like the character design though you could be more assertive on the use of some metaphors so that it makes the story more grand and have a gravitas. Thought the characters look really legendary. The development is good. Just be regular at updating, and you'll be good to go.

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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words. I appreciate your feedback on the use of metaphors and will definitely work on making the story more grand and impactful. I'll make sure to keep the updates regular. 😊📚✨

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