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Dracmon13
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Dude, it seems like I'm reading robotic writing, because I don't know, it's so chatty, the words are very formal and perfect, it's weird lol, and it seems like the writing slow

Harry Potter: Drakor

Vikrant_Utekar_5653

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Josh_Corder
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i know right i hate this way of story telling that describes how each person feels and explains its like there are so many ways to express something but the way it is said here seems exaggerating and unnecessary like the conversation with moody and headmaster it was to much and didnt even convey what a normal person would say Moody didnt even say how bad it was or all the blood on the wall in the cupboard or anything or that his non actions could cause another dark lord to rise sigh w/e peace out not for me to read this