Dracmon13

I read up to chapter 32, but that's not enough, this is shit, a lot of writing by AI, the MC doesn't develop, lots of holes in the plot, for example he wears metal armor while fighting with Mao, and His staff isn't cut and his armor is lol, there's another one, his power doesn't grow, the amount of drama there is here is repetitive. Characters who have the strength can lift entire ships, pick up people and crush them, here he can't even do that because he is so weak, there are times when he uses the power and there are times when he doesn't use it. Well, that's my review of this weird fanfic. translation generated by google

It's rubbish, the writing is very repetitive about Superman, distrust of him and such, a lot of mystery, and besides, the author nerfed Superman a lot, in his childhood he had x-ray vision and hearing, here at 18 to 20 years old he There's nothing hahaha, the author's stupid reason is because it's very appealing, so he didn't even try to include a Superman fanfic '-' and there's writing that is almost all AI translation generated by google.

There's no synopsis, the writing is clearly the use of artificial intelligence, and there's one more thing: he has the power of Hades from Saint Seiya and Harry Potter's magic or potion shouldn't work on him, but right?

Dude, this has no grammar, no spacing between lines, I'm reading an entire paragraph without understanding anything '-' you just have to improve it

the story is good and stuff, but the grammar is very bad, read some akikan fanfic and see how he created the character's speech patterns, maybe it will help with that

Dude, it seems like I'm reading robotic writing, because I don't know, it's so chatty, the words are very formal and perfect, it's weird lol, and it seems like the writing slow

mc is the strongest man in the world in the top 10, and is beaten by an external god '-', I don't know if you know, but this is written by chatgpt, there are some human parts but that's it, and apparently the author sees a lot of things to put some Chinese phrases

Well, until chapter 3 I was able to read the rest, they started changing your name to a Chinese version, with that typical Chinese behavior in fanfics, doing what translates. This may give inspiration to other people, but continuing to read this doesn't work.

Mc is extremely pathetic, he could stop the operation of the definitive weapon, stronger than the gym leaders, and has an absurd drama about the evil mega stone, etc., along with some very idiotic characters

It's interesting, it has huge potential, but the only problem with this fanfic is the grammar which leaves a lot to be desired, I see people giving it 4 stars, 5 stars, but never one criticizing anything below that or talking about the structure of the text '-'