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It is with unwavering determination that i am writing this review I would really love if the author could tell me what AI you are using so I can support it as I am sure that that patron does not go to it as this is mostly describing everyone like a passage from chap 15 his grandfather says the family is in the crafting business and then it's like upon hearing dans words a sense of connection enveloped ryu a bond forged through a shared passions and traditional family legacies reflecting on his own past life as an incentive soul entering the workshop gave him nostalgia ryu was happy to find a place like this in his new home there was something similar in his home in the past he found a new connection with his new grandfather he made a mental note to ask him to teach him crafting and thats just one paragraph many more like this so if you like this kind of thing give it a read as i don't it's always the same with so and so determination or with great passion i cant stand it myself

idk what happened but chapters got messed up was on chap 32 now there is only 15 and it jumps from like 12 to 80 something was good but meh if chapters are going to vanish and what not not worth reading

it's the otaku dream that is meant to stay just that a dream and not a reality I don't see how to manage more than one relationship so it could just be me not able to mentally juggle more and you peeps have some higher brain function that a meer pleb like me doesn't have

i would say this author likes drama a little to much as everything is forced and mc is like what ever i would just be like turn me and leave and train get stronger come back beat all there asses and be done with it and if he cant get stronger then just find a new place to live my longer life in peace away from them but i pretty sure they cant survive a nuke so wait for Alice to be away from them or find a way that a vision wouldn't save them and boom lul but hey he wants to stay around cuz he likes being treated like shit some peeps have weird tastes it wouldn't surprise me if he gets a mate and gets cucked repeatedly and still not care and only complain in his mind and since Edward likes to be in every ones mind he would know and tell them to keep it up sigh to much drama if it was me i would say fuck it and start making art as they say art is explosion

and another thing is by spreading the demon fox rumor is telling all the spies in the village the said child is the container for the fox and come steal him by plot armour that didn't happen as if they were just rumors they wouldnt have ninja watching him probably 24/7 and spies would notice something like that so not only does it not make any sense for most ninja to not know what he is is baffling almost all ninja should know what a tailed beast and know what a container is so in turn should know that naruto isnt the fox itself but container and not some tailed beast that took human form for its naffarious reason and it hurts just thinking about what they think that would be it it was really the tailed beast in human for it would be in a cage/jail not wondering the village all day as it would try to flee at ever moment it could lose its guards so why no one tried to steal him is beyond my understanding maybe a unsaid agreement to not take the other villages tailed beast or something else is unclear to me as they tried to kidnap Hinata and even blame them for a death of one of there ninja and get away with it so to say they wouldnt try is a understatement they should have tries every day just for fun eventually leading to naruto being trained as who wants a untrained tailed beast container as they done told the whole world who it was at this point and no one even tried to fuck around and find out by attempting to verify the rumor by seeing if they could kidnap him and see if he was guarded wouldn't make any sense not to what if they get lucky and get a new tailed beast for there village then could just crush leaf with there tailed beast as they obviously didnt have one at the moment if there's was a untrained kid

ok my thoughts on this are as follows if the forth and kushina were together almost all the ninjas that worked around them should know that kushina was pregnant as she couldnt have been unknown to people and was friends with mikoto idk if that was canon but its used alot anyways most should know and every one knows what the fourth looked like and any smart or decent ninja should be able to add his name i mean come on arnt they ninja for crist sake sigh if anything else they shouldnt be hostile and just indifferent but protective as to not let villagers get out of hand like by harming him physically but i dont see why they let him buy expired milk i pretty sure that its not good to drink it like he does but anyway if he dies the fox would be released and no one around to seal it into so would have to kill and look for new one for when it revives but village would be doomed by that time and villagers are danzos doing to get him to lose control so he can make him his tool my plot hole in original was no one seemed like a ninja and used information gathering as a skill and just believed in villager rumours as fact as it seems in the show like all the time sigh who the fuck does that its a ninjas job to get intel and what not and how the hell do the villagera know said info if not for someone spreading them for what ever reason like what if spy spread random stuff around all the time just to cause trouble like did you hear that little child of the blah blah orphanage and is the child of the blah clan head and the wife of blah clan leaders so they hide there relationship blah blah and by the logic in the show they would believe and spread it more and then regardless of true or false it would cause trouble in village because everyone believes in rumors spread around a village of ninja makes no sense just look white fang kills him self for a rumor spread by regular villagers and ninja believed it and not look at what really happened and its almost common knowledge that he failed a mission to save teammate and if he were to complete mission but lose team mate would be same if spread like this it was lose lose and most ninja should have seen it cuz instead of rumor being he failed mission to he got his teammates killed blah blah and the villagers should never of had that info in the first place or the village would have more then just one problem if rando villagers can find out about ninja mission why need spies to find secrets just ask a rando in the village to tell them whats what

bot account i take any 5 star reviews from a lvl 1 as nonsense i mean i did stop logging in after i found out points get deleted after a while so meh fuck them bastards taking points away so people have to spend money to unlock stuff but anyway yeah bots will be bots and it is what it is

i usually dont like multiple lovers as its hard to give equal affection and unrealistic to be able to but when its only two or three depending on there situation and makes sense it is reasonable in my mind i have read a few were it was a huge one and it made some sense but i would always think how any one could spend enough time with them to keep them invested in the relationship that didnt involve mind control or some other nonsense as anyone in a relationship knows it need something to keep the interest after years and after 3 its exponentially more difficult unless there all having fun with each other most of the time and then that could lead to more problems later sigh its only ment for fantasy then made real like kings of old harems they would cheat and sleep with guards or some such and then there kids would end up fighting for throne or killing each other for whatever reason sigh like i said hard sell for harem with me but not 2-3 is doable i am more okay with two then more so meh keep up the good work i haven't had any problems with novel so far

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yeah like i said idk if its just me as i cant place what feels off need an expert to tell if its just me or if there is something its still good so meh as long as someone actually finishes there story and not drop as its a big problem on here seems like just when the story gets good the authors like meh peace out i done feel like its full of trolls trying to start some new fetish or something lol