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Na1gel
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this is pure crack fic... all i have to say is that he starts to cultivate -_- .... and the mc was taken to a space for 30 years and now he comes back and goes after 10 year old hinata .... ah yes in like chapter 9 the writing of the authors turns from normal people writing to more chinese wuxia style of writing .. i vould say give it a try but honestly its to much crack for me i had to really try hard to read thru the chapters they were painful for me to read xD

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LordRaphael

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Felixxx
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Yeah like, bro telling the truth about the Uchiha massacre like it ain't an S class secret by the higher ups, and then the supposed anbu monitoring them doesn't report the physical changes of his body and his seemingly new personality, like damn if ur a trained killing machine and one of the elites i think you should be able to spot sudden changes in routine from people, like it ain't even gradual lol.

Raptor2244
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Lol I’m glad I read this. I was on board but cultivation??? I don’t think cultivation is bad but it seems like the cherry on top for this fic. So thanks for the warning.