For anyone asking what qq is, it's a website where u can read and write fanfiction, it has a SFW section, and a NSFW section, has a lot of good quality stories too, like this one.

Carol danvers

Bro I thought he was gonna be like Master chief from halo, realized the author misspelled chef. 🥴😂 Author, hit me up if you want a beta reader.

Added to library.

I'm so glad I let this sauce simmer and wait for a 100+ chapters, good job on translating it, kinda bummed that I didn't wait till 110 chapters.

I hope you don't go the clone route with this, kinda kills most fanfics I've seen going the clone route, seeing as he's an si, he should have contingencies to counter the situation where he get's his blood stolen from fights, cause you know, he has meta knowledge and he knows how the tropes and cliche's with clones go, especially in DC and Marvel, so I hope he stays in character and uses his intellect like he did building all that technology to stop the cloning attemps.

I hope he starts changing stuff soon, and maybe head off the homelander situation, if he's already alive, maybe raise him instead of the scientists, and I also hope that the actions he took in the war has some butterfly effects for other people too, being a decorated war hero and all that.

Bro said "ha father diff."

Maybe hire Claire?? Wasn't she like very good at her job? Wait what even was her job?

That's one of the most glaring problems of trying to write a smart/genius MC, the author isn't that smart.

I think you meant shurikenjutsu? Cause it said he knew ninjutsu too but then he threw kunais.

It's not as much as repeating, more of the wonky-ness of the AI and the author not editing it out, kinda off putting actually, I have no problem with AI as a crutch for writing but atleast give the effort to smoothen it out in the editing phase.

Maan just get a dna test and say surprise I'm your sensei's kid or something. 😂

Yikesss, danzo really gonn be the winner of the Darwin awards this time huh? Hahahahah

But it literally doesn't say that on the tasj description, all that's written is defeat a kage level shinobi, he did it, imo this feels like a contrived way of introducing tension and drama, cuz they're gonna question him, gonna needle him for answers and stuff, and he'll prolly tell an obvious lie or a lame excuse of not feeling worthy of it cuz of -insert reason- but it wont matter cus it's literally an order for promotion in a ninja village. But yeah that's my take on it, I'll have to wait to see what the author cooks up.

So putting the jinjuriki in a coma didn't count as defeating a kage level ninja?

"Unbeknownst to him, he noticed several men following him..." How does he notice them if it's unbeknownst to him?????

Yeah like, bro telling the truth about the Uchiha massacre like it ain't an S class secret by the higher ups, and then the supposed anbu monitoring them doesn't report the physical changes of his body and his seemingly new personality, like damn if ur a trained killing machine and one of the elites i think you should be able to spot sudden changes in routine from people, like it ain't even gradual lol.

What I think people don't like too, and me personally is that you didn't just do this right from the start, you could've made it like this from the beginning so that we don't jave to read about the god nerfing him, that way it would feel more organic, you say it's a loophole the last chapter but it feels more like a nerf.

So it says that it get's better at ch 10, I'm at ch 28 now and bro just dissed the hokage tryna act like some hotshot, dfck is up with him? I know that he has a garou template but damn you shoulda just put garou there to begin with, this just some power wank tryna act like it's different, some edgy ass MC that prolly would be dead for spouting all that stuff about how he hates ninjas, and that he doesn't wanna be tied down by the Hokage's orders and the village, like bro, one "ah so it's treason then" from Hiruzen and you'll be hunted down and it won't be an Uchiha massacre but a Hatake slaughter, corny ahh MC.