So far the story is excellent, not only that but the writing style is neat and expressive and the lore seems to be respected. The author manages to preserve the spirit of the universe (so no weird Naruto or DxD abilities) while innovating and taking the universe in a new, more magical and religious direction. I'd like the release pace of the chapters to be a little faster and the MC to have more struggle in his confrontations with the disciples of the others gods, because in my opinion that would give more weight to the idea that this is a battle that will dictate the course of the world and the death or ascendancy of an entire religion, peuple, culture and even a God. Otherwise, I have a humble request that doesn't need to be listened to if you have your own plans, but I'd like to see some kind of "clan building" or, in this case, race building. The Valyrians are a very small people at this point, and every time a Targaryen dies or they fight among themselves, it kinda hurts my heart. I'd like, if possible, if the MC doesn't kill his half-brother and father (after all his father helped his people greatly), etc - and if possible, helps them to stay alive if they're threatened. It would be fun to see if his lineage and extended family develop stronger powers as they reconnect with their gods and as the MC has children who have children of their own.
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SPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGHi, author here. Thank you for the review. I'm incredibly pleased that you enjoyed my fanfic. Unfortunately, due to extensive traveling, I couldn't upload it. Now that I'm finally settled, I will resume uploading the fanfic.Regarding Aegon and Aenys, I regret to inform you that Aegon must die because Aerys harbors a deep hatred for him. As for Aenys, his death is necessary for Aerys' character development. You see, when reading this fic, many believe it is amazing or good, but for me, it is filled with regrets and mistakes. I truly wished I had expanded more on the relationship between Aerys, Maegor, and Aenys – how they loved and treated each other, and how much Aegon was obsessed with the prophecy to the point of neglecting Aerys and Maegor. He even went as far as wishing Aerys had died at birth. Sadly, I was hasty to enter the plot and wasted its potential.Lastly, fear not! Not only will the Targaryens not die, but Valyrian heritage will also reclaim its glory and grow stronger than ever. It will be filled to the brim with dragons and Valyrians.Thank you all for reading and for your love and support. ❤️
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Divinedream:SPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGSPOILER WARNINGHi, author here. Thank you for the review. I'm incredibly pleased that you enjoyed my fanfic. Unfortunately, due to extensive traveling, I couldn't upload it. Now that I'm finally settled, I will resume uploading the fanfic.Regarding Aegon and Aenys, I regret to inform you that Aegon must die because Aerys harbors a deep hatred for him. As for Aenys, his death is necessary for Aerys' character development. You see, when reading this fic, many believe it is amazing or good, but for me, it is filled with regrets and mistakes. I truly wished I had expanded more on the relationship between Aerys, Maegor, and Aenys – how they loved and treated each other, and how much Aegon was obsessed with the prophecy to the point of neglecting Aerys and Maegor. He even went as far as wishing Aerys had died at birth. Sadly, I was hasty to enter the plot and wasted its potential.Lastly, fear not! Not only will the Targaryens not die, but Valyrian heritage will also reclaim its glory and grow stronger than ever. It will be filled to the brim with dragons and Valyrians.Thank you all for reading and for your love and support. ❤️
