Review Detail of Austin_oates in Reborn in attack on titan as a bender

The book was good at first with minor gramor and spelling errors that are expected of a fanfic, but around chapter 20, it got super confusing. I couldn't tell the timeline, and I felt the girl he took in personality was all over the place. Sometimes, she was a traumatized girl who feared being apart for 2 seconds and could not bathe without constantly checking if hes there outside the door. Sometimes, she doesn't even greet him when he returns and goes straight to her room, acting like a normal kid. Her personality is not consistent. I also don't like how you do the recap at the beginning of every chapter I don't know how it is for other people but I'd I want to looked at the last chapter I just scroll up so it's annoying,but that's just my personal preference. Lastly, I don't know how I feel about him passing out and getting memories of another past life. I mean, all thats done for me is make the plot less enjoyable and more confusing.