Item: Hsibfnskishv
Rating: 1

Jemena_JejeLv24yr

2019-12-26 04:58

i really want to tell the author that his novel is a trash and so bad plus its boring.. but i dont want to hurt his feeling what would i do?????????

Hsibfnskishv

RuinKing0899

4.1

150 Chs

Liked by 17 people

Replies9

Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Hahaha, oh my, such gentleman,I'm impressed!

4yr

SaikoYonebayashiLv11

Hypocrite.

4yr

Daolord777Lv12

go drink 10 liters of semen to fill that void in your ego

4yr

David_DrakeLv4

Kind of a dick comment.

4yr

DjabilongLv6

What a remarkable amount of sass, this senior likes you.

4yr

ShinmatsuLv11

Oq vc faria humm tipo se nao gosta nao ler so isso mais vc diz que e ruim e ainda le ai nao ne meu paceiro

4yr

Amv_125Lv3

You have great potential *strokes beard*

4yr

TheLonelyGodLv14

Tell him how you found this boring and why you don't like it🤷🏽‍♂️ Your review doesn't really help us here cause there are no details of why you gave that low review!🤷🏽‍♂️

3yr

Daoist770845Lv1

Парень иди нахуй

3yr

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TonyorobskyLv13

The system is bad. There is nothing about status, skills or inventory (though the existence of the inventory is implied). The shop doesn’t sell basic or intermediate skills/items, which makes earning points more of a chore than anything constructive. There was no « inner otaku » until Kuroka showed up, and the sudden appearance of stupid antics weirded me out. We don’t know if the protagonist is 14yo (4 years older than 10yo Murayama and Katase) or 17yo (as he was at his death and how he presented himself to Vali’s faction).

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RouxkLv12

Alright, new review My other review seems tick someone off the chart For me the story is good and the update is constant Just need more chapter for me Good job Author

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