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What is this shit? You made Kaidou look like a bum. what do you mean he will run the fastest if truly threatened? The guy literally killed the person who interfered in his fight with Oden. And though kaidou definitely can't kill akainu in 1 strike, he definitely won't struggle as much as you showed him. A day of fighting is more than enough to pack him up .
I really want to ask. Was the "reality" the complex was in just a planet in the same cosmos? Or a separate universe/reality altogether? And is the complex and the system confined to just a planet?
Leave it bro, it's clearly either written with the help of AI or the author has a gold fish memory where he doesn't remember the shit he wrote a few chapters back
The problem is, he doesn't know how this programming language works. How does "sufficient spiritual power" get represented here, as a intrinsic property? As a static class field? And external library? He needed to experiment to find out these things, but oh well
What? How does it not make sense? A higher level clearly means more comprehension, leading to higher lethality, damage or more functions from the skill. This is an incredibly simple and widely used pattern in novels
Wasn't it gold rank?
I don't understand. Why is he not dumping Essence into his attributes to get permanent stat boosts every chance he gets? 20 Essence gives 6 attribute points. He can easily go over 100 in each attribute in at most a week even if he took things casually. Is he retarded?
high chances it IS AI though? he's right
The story itself is good. The main character is unique, the world building is great, especially the world structure, and the unique take on how he starts his story. A great read that I really loved. Do you know what the sad part is? Further down the story, it's AI-generated. I noticed it after chapter 120, but the repetitive sentences that used different, fancy words to describe the same thing, or the typical phrases generated by AI, the fact mismatch across chapters makes it all the more apparent. The nail in the coffin was a chapter where a paragraph was duplicated, and you can see that the paragraph was written in 2 different ways, in the middle of the chapter, something common if u slap together a chapter in a hurry with AI. The reason i have a problem with AI is that it does NOT give the same feeling as it gave off at the start. The fights are not the same, the characters are acting wonky and out of character, different ideas clashing etc. And this is typical with AI-generated content, so if u also don't like AI-generated content, don't read this novel. I believe it wasn't AI-generated since the start but somewhere further.
It does not make sense mate. That is a half-assed reason. You conveniently ignored the shit i mentioned as to why this is bullshit. Especially when he was somewhat matched by a guild leader later on ( No amount of him 'holding back' is gonna drive away the fact that u made it too close). You don't just write bullshit and then 'give a reason' and expect people to magically think that the BS makes sense. I have already dropped this though, good luck.