i don’t know what i would do without your help 😭😭 THANK U AGAIN

hmm

I will try to uphold your expectations my goodman

Did it switch from 1st pov to 3rd ?

Book is heat so far; can’t wait til u drop more chapters 🔥

THANK U FOR CATCHING THAT

Very nice beginning to a lengthy book. The description is vivid, the dialouge is nice, and the premise is interesting. Looking forward to more this novel is looking to offer.

Thank you my good man

As I said, the bold is for people with eye issues just like me, to be able to read the dialouge clearer. Thanks for the review nonethless

I got inspiration from that cover! Hope it doesn’t look like a balant copy though

Thank you for you comment 👏

I enjoy the premise; very unique. The execution is well and the writing quality is fine. Waiting to see how this will turn out.

Very nice book. Little to none grammatical errors.

Alright let me put it out there: I suck at sypnosis, descriptions, blurbs; whatever you want to call them. I suck at them. So here's potential questions readers may have, and I'll answer them: Q) Harem? A) No. Never ask this again. I know you were thinking about it. Rid that thought from your brain. Okay, we're good now. Onto the next question. Q) Will MC be TOO overpowered? A) Yes and no. He'll be strong of course, but not the strongest in the first volume. He is still learning, and he will lose both mentally and physically. Q) How dark will this be? A) This story will take the 'grimdark' genre. After all, it is clearly inspired by Game of Thrones. At the start, the novel won't be too dark, but later on, it will take a turn. A big one. Q) How will the progression be? A) The progression will be long. That's all I can say for now. Don't expect a battle every single chapter. Q) Why'd you give this a five-star review. A) I, with plenty of confidence, can say that this story is great. And plus, since you're reading this review, might as well and click on the 'read' button. Thanks for clicking on this story nonetheless.

Very nice premise and pacing. The writing quality is decent, there are a few puncation errors but they're easy to fix. Other than that, the story seems to be good so far.

the comma in the first sentence isn't needed

High quality writing, unique premise and well-written dialouge. The novel is good so far, and I hope the quality will continue to impress. 10/10.

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Very nice first chapter, sets the one for what the reader will be expecting as the story later progresses.