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Membaca buku-buku
developing the dungeon and himself and finally get to scrapping with his hands .don't leave me with the idea of it alone and leaving the place .The starting characters need to have more impact on the story . Especially Muru ,give her a little more brains n power .let her take her role as his shield .The trader succubus can lead to interesting story lines also .if you gon leave any ,use them fully b4 it
just waiting for new chapters too
i will rewrite it tomorrow, was still looking for the errors in it.