Review Detail of Laziest1 in has been cancelled
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Great novel. Wordind is your biggest problem a simple editting program will fix most of it. Read till chapter 4 but the wording was stopping me from enjoying the flow of the book having to correct words in my head.
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Disukai oleh 2 orang
SUKABalasan6
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haven't thought about it yet. I'm improvising the whole book ,but probably in later chapters if u want . I only have one partner in mind so far
RainbowBeheader:harem?
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RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader
broken_pen_:Thank you I will on it starting today . As I said I'm pretty new to this so it'll take some time
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader
broken_pen_:haven't thought about it yet. I'm improvising the whole book ,but probably in later chapters if u want . I only have one partner in mind so far
broken_pen_Penulisbroken_pen_
skirt chasing is cliché. I'll keep one FL for a long while then I can't think of anything to do with them to add interest in the story.
RainbowBeheader:i would love only 1FL most harems make plot worse
RainbowBeheaderLv13RainbowBeheader
so this will end up with only 1FL or is there possibility of harem? i dont even read novels till i know that authors will not add harem
broken_pen_:skirt chasing is cliché. I'll keep one FL for a long while then I can't think of anything to do with them to add interest in the story.