ZGFics
Tambien publico en Wattpad ZGFics @ZGerardo1. Hi, I'm ZGFics, a novice writer :D. I also publish on Wattpad, where you can find my stories with more images if you'd like. ZGFics @ZGerardo1.
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I appreciate your comments and ideas. The one you mentioned is very good, but I already have clear which familia will join. Here's a little preview: by the time Joel arrives, Hestia hasn't descended from the heavens yet. I also have in mind a similar ability for the protagonist, although in a slightly more selfish way. Argentina el mejor país del mundo, saludos de Argentina pá.
I'll clarify that I'm a novice in writing. At the moment, I only have three clear girls as candidates for the harem: Asfi Al Andromeda, Ryuu Lion, and Sanjouno Haruhime. I'm thinking about how I could incorporate more girls in the future without the relationship feeling too forced. For example, they could be Cassandra Ilion, Tiona Hiryute, Riveria Ljos Alf, or Ais Wallenstein.
So far in these first chapters I find the story quite entertaining. I hope that the protagonist does not become op from one chapter to another but rather that he uses his intellect and continues to develop little by little along with his personality and interaction with the people around him showing hints of his past in contrast to his new reality.