ArgaNov01
Just love what I've written! I'm a wandering author 😎 Authors in many places! 🙄😎
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Hi Dear, it's nice to finally be able to write something for you again. You know, I'm really excited about how many people are reading my book. For me, the books I write are of course good. But, you guys are the judge in the end. I'm not a perfect writer. There are many mistakes in the writing that I could have made because of my selfishness. For all that, I apologize. Please enjoy this story. And see you in the next ML theme story. [img=coins]
Hello, congratulations on reading the second book with a female protagonist as the main character. After messing around with the male protagonist, I have more work to do. But, I loved it. I hope readers do too. Leave your encouragement for me for Cyril (Our MC in the previous story) and Eleonora (Beautiful woman without magic but scary here) Happy reading! PS. Forgive me for arrogantly judging my writing as perfect even though I'm a believer in "nothing in the world is perfect".
You know, even in the real world I have trouble controlling my own life
You're right, I've already changed that one word almost four times
Yes, as you said. That's why I won't back down just because someone else says my writing is bad.
I'll learn not to make you cry when u read it. I promise 😌
Don't say that, it makes me want to cry 😩
I'll take care of it right away. I actually wrote in a word document first before copying it and pasting it into the app. It could be that I accidentally copied the same chapter. Thank you for pointing out my mistake.
someone sent me a picture of Cyril some time ago. I wear it in my head when i think of Cyril. Although his skin color is not quite the same as i imagined. But, i will probably make ot like this in the future. I don't know where the person got this image
What is this about Cyril's skin? His skin color is brown, the upper leftmost color in my image.
I will keep your advice in mind. I do have a lot to learn to make global readers satisfied with what I write. I apologize if you found many mistakes in my first story. Thank you for your advice! I really appreciate it. Notes: They say that my MC is naive. lol
Hi, I tried using pronouns, but some readers didn't understand the person I was referring to so I decided to just go back to Cyril. I will learn to do better so that you enjoy this story. Thank you for leaving a comment. Keep following this story and help me with your kind comments.
Thank you for warning me. For some reason. For some parts I publish in a sleepy state. Your advice is greatly appreciated. I will immediately reread it as you wish. Keep following this story and encourage me to keep writing until the end.
Thank you for leaving a comment. I've tried to fix it every time someone comments, but fixing it too often also makes it worse. I'll put your assessment in my notes and when I have time, I'll fix it all over again. Your suggestions are greatly appreciated.
I'll check it out