I think its intentional, because that's how people talk in forums like 4chan or in old game boards online.

I actually quite like it! Though the lack of a summary is something of a bummer, and I admit to finding the President's speech on the first chapter a tad weird, I like the narration and the protagonist is simultaneously relatable and has a personality of his own. The Vale sends like it is harbouring some secrets, which means we've something to look forward to. Here's hoping you keep writing.