I actually quite like it! Though the lack of a summary is something of a bummer, and I admit to finding the President's speech on the first chapter a tad weird, I like the narration and the protagonist is simultaneously relatable and has a personality of his own. The Vale sends like it is harbouring some secrets, which means we've something to look forward to. Here's hoping you keep writing.
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SUKAHey thanks for being my first review. I think youre right the presidents speech is a little awkward. I was struggling to who would make an announcement of that level Other than him but wasnt really sure. Also with todays political mess I didnt want to spend too much time on him. hopefully Everything else is good and you keep reading! Enjoy!