Transhumanist
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Transhumanist6dBalas Vlad_6530Nothing about this story makes sense so far.
On a serious note, My name was Wu Xian. and this was pretty much my 2nd life. In my first life, I was an astronomer. I always felt like Earth was too small, so when the day came when I was reaching the end of my life, I picked the best way to go out... through a black hole.- Transhumanist6dBerkomentar"A wizard never lies, Gandalf, so I don't think it's just a tale," Aldril replied. "Then who killed Ancalagon the Black?" he asked with an expectant look.
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Dude don't you know the meaning of the word "heretic"?
The soft sound of the birds singing in the morning gave a touch of tranquility to the warm morning, Aldril opened his eyes slowly, still lying on the log where he slept, his thoughts wandered to that dream he had "That was a beautiful dream, who wouldn't be happy if he dreamed that Geralt? Only a heretic wouldn't be happy." - Transhumanist6dBalas Ax_nevermay_cry
The MC's character was half baked, you are telling us that someone willing to work in a less than ideal dead end job with an exploitative boss is suddenly passionate for adventures? Personality changes are more gradual, you should have shown why and how he changed his personality and profession etc. He could move to Minas Tirith and make his engineering skill work. He would have a much better life than being Orc fodder in the wilderness.
The other option is that he will go for Bilbo's help, as Bilbo is a treasure hunter (Thief to some) to help Thorin Oaken Shield, in which case he would be at the beginning of The Hobbit. - Transhumanist6dBerkomentar
That's pretty much less than a ranger. A ranger can't be compared to a mere mercenary working for coin.
"Ranger?" Hearing Gandalf speak, Aldril paused and with a hand to his chin replied "More than a ranger, I consider myself an adventurer, as long as there is good pay, I will be there helping." - Transhumanist6dBerkomentar
Groomed instead of manicured.
His calm temperament in the face of predators, his black color, his finely manicured mane, gave him an air of nobility, no doubt it was lucky to come across this horse, although it cost him almost all his money, he did not regret buying him. - Transhumanist7dDiterbitkan
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Thank you for the clarification, it was very enlightening.
"In case of serious injury or life-threatening situations, having the chance to break through adversity could be considered a life-saving measure," Lin Xiu thought to himself. - Transhumanist8dBerkomentar
What does break through adversity mean? Is it a short time buff? Does the pill motivate you cheerleader style?
"In case of serious injury or life-threatening situations, having the chance to break through adversity could be considered a life-saving measure," Lin Xiu thought to himself. - Transhumanist9dBalas HungryWolf2024
Ah Lion of the Night is the dumb lion then...
I will give you your chance. I want you to fuck up that stupid "Great Other" who serves the will of that dumb lion. You can do anything else you want in between and after your task is complete. Don't worry, there is no penalty for being good or evil. Only how others will perceive you. I will shield your soul for you. Unless you find religion then any of the Divinities will be able to perceive the changes to you. Remember if you attract their attention and fuck up my little prank, I will make you suffer. - Transhumanist10dBerkomentar
So the Great Other serves the will of Tywin?
I will give you your chance. I want you to fuck up that stupid "Great Other" who serves the will of that dumb lion. You can do anything else you want in between and after your task is complete. Don't worry, there is no penalty for being good or evil. Only how others will perceive you. I will shield your soul for you. Unless you find religion then any of the Divinities will be able to perceive the changes to you. Remember if you attract their attention and fuck up my little prank, I will make you suffer. - Transhumanist11dBerkomentar
This is hilarious. A soldier requesting psychological counseling in the middle of the Apocalypse.
"Every moment, they're suffering the accusations of their conscience. It's been only six hours since the order was issued, and already two soldiers have voluntarily sought psychological counseling." - Transhumanist13dDiterbitkan
Nice story, but I would love to read an edited version of the story without the lame made up words like kushi. It really kills the vibe for me. It isn't like the primitives from another world are speaking English among themselves, it is accepted that we are reading their original language as English. Just why aren't all of the words translated for gods' sake?
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The pointless purple prose is making the story hard to read. I hope it gets better in the future.
It was this very ability that alerted him to Emily's plight. Emily, a teenager whose life had been upended by the pandemic, was a patient under Alex's care. Her laughter had long since faded, replaced by a quiet despair that echoed through the empty corridors of the hospital. Alex noticed the subtle signs of her inner turmoil, the way her gaze lingered a moment too long on the sunset, or how her conversations always circled back to farewells. - Transhumanist13dBerkomentar
Mandatory summons can't be called a plea for help.
The following year, as the pandemic raged on, Alex received a mandatory summons to serve on the pandemic front lines. It was a call to action, a plea for help that he couldn't ignore. - Transhumanist13dBerkomentar
Isn't indispensable
Rhaegar eyed him with disdain. "Uncle, the kingdom has the might of all the major lords and knights. Your help is indispensable." - Transhumanist14dBerkomentar
Translation quality has become pretty hit and miss. There are some persistent mistakes that make me think translation team isn't going to bother doing better. I hope in the future there will be better translation and proofreading, but it is hard to enjoy in this state.
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