overlord9000

Good job keep up the great work just don't strain yourself and give yourself burn out

I can't remember exactly where it mentioned it but pretty sure he got transformed into a male with power of laws devil fruit so he basically got the best 100% trans job becoming a man hope that helps but I'm sure you can look this up easily enough

glad to have you back really enjoyed this story

i feel like his bounty should have been 666 not 555 as he is the devil for the marines

it really is a good story i would recommend it as it has some interesting ideas that you don't get to see often in a Pokemon fiction or they don't pull it off well and it makes the story trash but this one has done a very good job with it i am greatly looking foreword to more chapters as the 48 chapters is really not enough i hope for a nice 200+ chapters please don't drop this story and thank you for the chapters

female

this story is so moreish its like when you have pringles but eat only one then look again the whole thing is gone i read the first chapter then before i knew it came to here wish there are more chapters this is really good thank you so far and hope you do more great chapter

good really enjoy it

Concept101 did this story on fanfiction.net has been writing since May 2016 and you can read the old one he write that has more chapters if you want

Sorry for taking so long guys I am writing when I can but life got complicated need to get a new job and it's not going great I have about 10 more chapters written and I'm starting to rewrite it from chapter 1 I have an interview Friday if that goes well I will start posting this weekend if thing go bust hold out a little longer but I have not stopped writing this story so again sorry for the delay