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Waifu Gacha System (On Hold)

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An unfortunate young man died in his sleep. Due to the unlucky nature of his death, the god of reincarnation gave him a second chance. After 16 years in his new world he is given the main character's exclusive privilege; A system. A.N. 1. This is my first Fan-Fic, don't expect it to be perfect 2. Any critisism is welcomed, under the condition that it is constructive and not random insults 3. I own almost no character (at this moment). 4. I am aware the sypnosis is unrefined, I didn't want a small all the details here, all of it will be in the prologue. 5. This is a wish-fufilment fan-fic, women will be laid and annoying bastards will be killed. 6. The main point of this novel is the smut aspect. Action takes a backseat.

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Chapter 1Prologue 1/2

A young man is peacefully sleeping, within a small room in a rundown apartment. Blissfully unaware of the misfortune he is about to face.

*SHATTER*

Through the newly shattered window a black shadow came crashing through the bedroom and violently landing on the soft carpet. The glass shards scatter throughout the room as if to create a minefield. The young man continues sleeping on the edge of the bed as if nothing has happened.

Unfortunately for the young man, he sneezed, yes, sneezed, while sleeping. Because of the sneeze, he slightly lifted his head and fell off of the bed, conveniently onto a shard glass shard pointing towards the skys. The glass pierced his skull. The boy died before he could even wake up.

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He opened his eyes to see, nothing. He couldn't see his fingers when he tried so desperately to, he couldn't see the ground he was standing on. All he knew was that he was dead. He had a large amount of time to think, think about his life, think about what would happen to him now.

After an undetermined amount of time, a ball of light appeared in front of him. It was only a small ball of light but in this endless abyss it shone brighter than anything else.

Successfully drawing the attention of the boy the ball spoke,"Hello, young one. It seems you are quite confused about where you are and what has happened."

The boy tried to talk but nothing exited his mouth, if he even had one.

"There is no need for you to talk child, just listen to what I have to say" The ball of light said sagely.

"I am a being that has existed since before this universe was even created, my emotions have grown dull, I haven't shown a smile for millennia. However, your death was something that made me laugh, something I can't even remember doing last." The light said, monotone as ever.

The boy was quite mad that his death was something to be laughed at, considering he doesn't remembering it happening at all, he simply woke up in the endless abyss and correctly guessed that he had passed away.

"Now, before you get too upset, this comes with a benefit to you." The voice concluded.

The boy's ear perked up at the mention of a benefit, after all, no free things are bad.

"I can make an exception on the cycle of reincarnation for you, usually the soul's memories are wiped and are sent to a random world. However, because of the joy you gave me, I will make an exception. I will give you the chance to reincarnate into a world of your choosing, with a body of your choosing and a system of your choosing." The ball of light seemed to puff its chest out at the mention of its generous rewards.

The boy thought of all the fan-fictions he has read and wanted to ask if he could just get three wishes instead.

"Now boy, don't get ahead of yourself, even omnipotent beings cannot think of every loophole you humans can. Now, either take my offer or begone." The voice said with aggression.

A board appeared in front of the boy, and by using his mind he could move and adjust it. The board contained worlds to go to, from anime worlds, manga worlds, and even movie worlds. Instead of looking through the worlds for hours on end, the boy simply looked at the ball.

"You want many worlds crossed-over into one, at my own discretion? A complex request boy, but one that can be done." The voice was indifferent, as if he was above the request set for him.

After looking through his repertoire of "Perfect Characters", he narrowed it down to four people. Madara Uchiha and Indra Otsusuki from 'Naruto', Adam from 'Record of Ragnarök', and Diluc from 'Genshin Impact'

After careful consideration of who is the most badass out of the 4, he chose Adam. He was made to mirror the gods after all.

"I see, a wise choice for a human." The boy started to think that the voice was bipolar.

And lastly, a system to take into the new world. This was something the boy and thought of a long time ago, he didn't hesitate. He chose to bring a system that mirrored a game in his past life. A gacha game that had characters from almost every form of media, and allowing the player to get their hands on badass waifus.

"You wouldn't rather a system makes you stronger rapidly? Or one where you can enslave women with a touch? Humans truly are peculiar. Regardless, off you go human, you have sullied my eyes by being in my prescence" The ball of light shimmered and suddenly everything went dark again. The boy was once again in the abyss. However, he managed to hear quiet voices around him.

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Irregular In DxD

Vivian : Mother raised me to be a good dragon so I shall strive to be one. Tobio: Define a good dragon? Vivian: One that grant's a quick release from the embrace of life so that you can go to the embrace of death? Tobio: ........ Issei: Is that considered good? Vivian: Of course they should rejoice at the fact that they are being granted different ways to end , they can choose from the many options I have , 'Decapitation', 'Being dismembered ', 'Being burned'....... Lavinia: Vi-kun I don't think that's what you call kindness Vivian: ..... Grayfia: Vivi-sama may I suggest a massage to calm your temper Akeno: Vivi-sama I promise being tied up calms your nerves~ Tsubaki: Stop trying to corrupt Vivi-sama you pervert! B-But Tsubaki won't mind being tied up by Vivi-sama.... Serafall: Vi-chan come visit us quickly So-tan and I miss you dearly~ Sona: Onee-sama! I-I do not miss this womaniser at all! Hmph! Rias: P-Please help me! I will do anything! Issei: Buchou! Sairaorg: Vivian my Mom has been dying to see you .... But please be a bit mindful she is still recovering ..... Vivian: ........ An Irregular Piece in the chessboard known as the Supernatural world .... what will this piece accomplish ....... This is a DxD Au There will be many changes , dont want to hear anyone crying over them. It's called a fanfic , and I'll do what I want with my version. Slow pace Check the tags before reading , I don't want anyone complaining about mindless things. Warning Tags Incest. Netori (MC will cuck others) Expect smut. ....... Pat**on: patreon.com/Life_Sa_Beach

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Etiger789
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Yuri_is_Ntr
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Look, now I read all chapters and could give a full opinion on this novel. Yeah it's dropped in the score from my first attempt. Problems like I pointed out before not getting any better. Pacing and characters that act as not how they would act, is still same. I don't know if that's an actual problem because I do like big harems. But if character don't act as they supposed to act, is it truly what readers wants? I mean, we come here for girls that we already know, but they don't have same personality only looks and some parts. That's all. Character of mc is just unbearable. And if you see what kind of anime author actually used, he's luckluster in brain department become even more obvious. Is it truly Adam? No, he is not the same badass that you know from ragnarok manga. He is just some dude, that apparently think that luck is a most powerful thing in the world. He have nerfed version of his ability , he doesn't train. And he doesn't work for anything in his life. Author just give him girls. And about his abilities and world background. Author add dxd, but I don't think he actually read light novel. He doesn't seem to understand how strong people he add, and how problematic they are for a future. And it's really weird, 3 factions that have people who could easily obliterate whole countries, sided with Japan...how this supposed to work? It's totally unbelievable and useless for them. They have underworld /heaven, they don't need to fear American heroes. And knowing all this , this opportunistic guys have guts to add all his points in luck and never bother with strength and agility. In the world where trihexa could destroy world... That's beyond me. Like I could get that you main priority is romance part of the story. But you not even trying. You create whole arc when Adam get himself captured by humans and need to rely on his women's. But you keep talking that he is not a useless leach that hide behind his girls back... And under all circumstances, you never actually showed how strong he is. Let me remind you , Zeus from ragnarok that get him, and Zeus from dxd is two different gods. And approximately Zeus from dxd would be on par with hades, which was on the 10 strongest creature list under number 8. And someone like great red which was ultimate in power and not even count in 10 strongest list was slained in a future. ... I just doesn't know what to think. Is it good? It's frustrating. All those stuff add up and repeated constantly. So take my word, you will see it even if you try to not think much about it. It's will get in to you skin like a worm and wriggle you soul soon enough. But hey, author say that he gonna show mc true strength soon enough...just like he say, that mc wouldn't be weak fry but we could believe in it right? P. S. Arc in a prison was infuriating.

Konrad_The_Fourth
Konrad_The_FourthLv4
Photosphere
PhotosphereLv14

This one got me conflicted, smut but good... MC got reincarnated into some crossover world where the base is MHA, so far there is MHA, DXD, Nisekoi and MCU. He has the body and mind of Adam from Record of Ragnarok and some very convenient powers as well as the best thing of the novel, A system that allows him to summon waifus to the world for the uncultured. Writing Quality: Good, nigh-perfect English, the only thing I complain about is delivery. Stability of Updates: Can't say much here as I sadly caught up in a Hiatus, hope it is not dropped. Story Development: Very well done plot for a Smut novel that usually doesn't have fk all. Character Design: Great character design, the girls are very loyal to their original personalities. World Background: Many interesting locations however proper scenario description is lacking in most scenes (Characters' position, weather, furniture etc...) Now comes my personal opinion and I shall judge it in a Smut POV. I like the development of the relationships with the girls but you make a lot of sexual tension between to make a very average lemon scene. Usually, it is the other way around, authors make great lemons but leave the development aside. MC barely shows emotions, there are too few dialogues in some occasions where the scene could've been more meaningful, for example, Tsunade and Rias' scenes however I can't really blame you for that since the whole thing is Smut. Sadly, the girls are treated as objects to some extent, they don't have any life aside from Fking MC and watching TV except for a few ones. Sometimes the harem is so big that some girls aren't recalled often. I love the diversity in the harem, every single character is a remarkable woman/girl. In my humble opinion, I believe you should continue developing the girl's characters but more in a spiritual way. Make them useful, give them occupations, that way you don't have to put all of them on a screen all the time. The girls are literally fked silly, and none of them is a weakling, and even if they were somehow ambushed, MC can protect them with the help of the system. So why not make them go their way and involve them in that world's society? Some of them could work part-time in stores (mikasa, ning'er, meiko, yumeko, eve, kurumi, marika etc...), some of them could be teachers (Vados, LD, Grayfia, Gray) some of them could be trainers (Tsunade, Albedo) some could be office workers (Mamako, Raikou, Mitsuki), or they could be maids, Natasha can keep working as a spy there are a lot of scenarios that you could use not only to make smut but also to develop the relationships with the girls other than just fking. Rias should still have her peerage Come on man you have a crossover with worlds that don't lack events and possibilities, you can do better. Greetings.

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