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Kira_Chiya
Kira_ChiyaLv44yr
2020-11-07 01:39

i don't mind misspelling because my English is bad but i mind long paragraphs. 🌟🌟 story development is sooooooooooo bad 😥😥 . 🌟🌟 Update stability is good. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 world background is meh. 🌟🌟🌟 character design is good. 🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Why story development is bad? What's wrong?

Kira_Chiya
Kira_ChiyaLv4

look at Albedo summon

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Etiger789
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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Look, now I read all chapters and could give a full opinion on this novel. Yeah it's dropped in the score from my first attempt. Problems like I pointed out before not getting any better. Pacing and characters that act as not how they would act, is still same. I don't know if that's an actual problem because I do like big harems. But if character don't act as they supposed to act, is it truly what readers wants? I mean, we come here for girls that we already know, but they don't have same personality only looks and some parts. That's all. Character of mc is just unbearable. And if you see what kind of anime author actually used, he's luckluster in brain department become even more obvious. Is it truly Adam? No, he is not the same badass that you know from ragnarok manga. He is just some dude, that apparently think that luck is a most powerful thing in the world. He have nerfed version of his ability , he doesn't train. And he doesn't work for anything in his life. Author just give him girls. And about his abilities and world background. Author add dxd, but I don't think he actually read light novel. He doesn't seem to understand how strong people he add, and how problematic they are for a future. And it's really weird, 3 factions that have people who could easily obliterate whole countries, sided with Japan...how this supposed to work? It's totally unbelievable and useless for them. They have underworld /heaven, they don't need to fear American heroes. And knowing all this , this opportunistic guys have guts to add all his points in luck and never bother with strength and agility. In the world where trihexa could destroy world... That's beyond me. Like I could get that you main priority is romance part of the story. But you not even trying. You create whole arc when Adam get himself captured by humans and need to rely on his women's. But you keep talking that he is not a useless leach that hide behind his girls back... And under all circumstances, you never actually showed how strong he is. Let me remind you , Zeus from ragnarok that get him, and Zeus from dxd is two different gods. And approximately Zeus from dxd would be on par with hades, which was on the 10 strongest creature list under number 8. And someone like great red which was ultimate in power and not even count in 10 strongest list was slained in a future. ... I just doesn't know what to think. Is it good? It's frustrating. All those stuff add up and repeated constantly. So take my word, you will see it even if you try to not think much about it. It's will get in to you skin like a worm and wriggle you soul soon enough. But hey, author say that he gonna show mc true strength soon enough...just like he say, that mc wouldn't be weak fry but we could believe in it right? P. S. Arc in a prison was infuriating.

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