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Have you ever thought about what would happen if you are in the manga that you loved? What could you have changed? Or how you would enjoy that world? Join our MC as he finds himself in a manga world for unknown reasons and join the main character in his quest to find...One Piece!" From the works of Eiichiro Oda. DISCORD LINK: https://discord.gg/GaYxz6V COMPLETED Author's note: This story involves a lot of wish fulfillment and yes, it has harem. Still, this is my first story here in Webnovel. Some may know me better as imaginexbreaker in RoyalRoadl. I used to write World Gate Online and World Gatekeepers along with other stories but I had stopped writing them as I no longer have time after graduation. This fanfic is something I have only been casually writing in my spare time and is quite lax. Chapters would be slow, but if its popularity is good, I will try to write faster. *Oh, and you can also read this along with reading the manga. Since I wrote this while reading it haha. **Cover art is made by me :)

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Chapter 1One Piece!?

A young man with a whitish blonde hair blinked repeatedly as he stared at the scenery around him.

Wherever he looked, as far as he can see, it seems there is nothing but the vast waters of the sea.

The dazzling sky-colored sea reflected in his eyes as he felt the indescribable freedom it offered.

There was just one problem though.

"Why the hell am I floating in the middle of nowhere!?"

Lucas shouted in frustration.

"Alright Lucas, think. What was the last thing you remembered!"

He closed his eyes in a desperate move to recall the events that took place before this.

"I was at home. Reading mangas as usual. I think there was an update in One Piece but I don't remember reading it...ah!"

Lucas exclaimed as he started to remember.

"Right! I was about to start reading it then...uhh, I can't remember. I think I fell unconscious? Wait, am I in a dream?"

Just as he was about to start panicking, suddenly, he felt something grab on to him and was pulled out of the waters!

"Eh? Ehh? Ehhh!!??"

As soon as he turned back to see what had grabbed him, he saw an overstretched arm actually latch onto him!

"What the hell is going on!!!???"

Lucas screamed once more as he flew through the air with the arm attached to him and speedily retracting.

Meanwhile, a few distances away, a ship was sailing the waters.

At the helm of the ship was a figure of a sheep's head. On top of it sat a young man with a red opened vest and a straw hat.

"You guys! I think I caught something!"

"Woah! I didn't expect your Gomu Gomu no Fishing to actually catch something Luffy!"

Another young man with a long nose and goggles on his head exclaimed, seemingly excited.

"Shishishishi! I told you I'd catch something Ussop! Sanji! Get ready for today's lunch!"

A curly eyebrowed man rolled his eyes at the side.

"Luffy, you better not catch anything too weird!"

"Maybe it's a treasure!"

On another side, a small reindeer standing on its two legs started to shine his eyes.

"Haha! Chopper, if this is a treasure, I'm keeping it!"

"Nami! I'm the one who caught it so I should keep it!"

The straw hat-wearing boy shouted at a young girl with orange hair with a pinwheel and orange tattoo on her shoulder.

"Zzzz"

As usual, ignoring everything in his surroundings was a green-haired man with three swords at the side was sleeping on the side.

"Umm...guys, I don't think it's a fish or a treasure."

"Quak!"

A blue-haired young girl standing beside a large bird said as she pointed towards the incoming arm.

"What're you saying Vivi? If it's not a treasure or fish, what is it?"

The straw hat-wearing boy tilted his head in confusion then turned to look at his own arm that's still retracting.

Everyone else on the ship also did the same.

"Aaaa…"

"Hm? I think I heard something!"

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

*Boom*

The retraction of his arm came at great speed causing it to recoil and smash to deck along with whatever he caught.

When everyone took a look, they all glared at the straw hat-wearing boy.

"LUFFY! Look who you just kidnapped!"

"Eh!? It's not a fish!"

"Where's my treasure!?"

"Sanji! Can we eat him?"

"HELL NO!"

As the rest started to shout among each other, the blue-haired girl came to the unconscious man's side and examined him.

"He seems unconscious. I think we should at least treat him for now."

"Eh!? We need a doctor! Where's the doctor!?"

The small reindeer panicked exaggeratedly and started to shout. Seeing this, the long-nosed boy slapped his head.

"You're the doctor here!"

"Ah, that's right."

After a few bustles here and there, they finally managed to settle the unconscious man to a room inside.

"Well, I guess I'll go cook something from what's left for when he wakes up."

"Sanji! Mine too!"

"Yeah yeah."

Hearing about food, the straw hat-wearing boy immediately ignored everything and demanded for food. To which the curly eyebrowed man can only nod helplessly.

"Usopp, let's use Carue as bait. Maybe we'll catch something this time!"

"Hey!"

It was at this time that they seemed to have passed through a steamy hot spot and encountered a weird person.

The person dressed weirdly and had the ability of the Mane Mane no Mi. The clone clone devil fruit.

When he touched someone, he is able to save their image for him to copy when he touches his own face.

The ability was, in a sense, incredible as not only the image is copied, but even the physique of the person!

Be it a boy or girl, he can become them so long as he wished!

By the time he left the ship, Lucas has just awakened.

When he woke up, he was now inside a wooden room but there was no one in it at the moment except for him.

"Where?"

Lucas muttered and suddenly heard voices from outside.

"What's wrong Vivi? You look serious?"

"Nothing...it's just that...one of the man's faces he showed earlier...was my father!"

"Eh!? You mean the King!?"

"...I think the person we just met is the man called Mr.2 from Baroque Works! Bon Clay!"

"What!?"

It wasn't just them who shouted in exclaim. Lucas also shouted as his eyes turned wide and his mouth almost dropped to the floor.

Seeing him out of the room, everyone else also looked towards him.

Lucas wondered if he was still in a dream.

After all...the ones in front of him right now are...

"Oh, you're awake! Shishishi!"

That straw hat...Strawhat Pirates' captain Monkey D. Luffy!

"Oi Luffy! You better have a good explanation to him for suddenly kidnapping him like that!"

That long nose...God Usopp!

"Ah, are you feeling better now?"

That tanuki sized reindeer...Cotton candy lover Chopper!

"I wonder if we should charge him with Berries for the treatment?"

That orange hair...Cat burglar Nami!

"Hn? Oh, lunch is over there. Eat it if you're hungry."

That curly eyebrow...Blackleg Sanji!

"Huh? Who's this guy and why is he on our ship?"

That green hair and three swords...Santoryuu Roronoa Zoro!

"You should rest up if you're still not feeling well."

"Quak!"

Eh? That blue hair and princess-like aura...Alabasta Princess Vivi Nefertari!? And Carue!?

Lucas was confused. It seems that he is in the world of One Piece now...but these two shouldn't be a part of the crew?

Hold on. These looks...Robin, Franky, and Brook are also not here...Eh? Could it be!?

The start of the Alabasta arc!?

This...this is when Luffy is finally recognized as a great threat! The time he defeated Crocodile!

It took some time but Lucas finally managed to get a hold of himself.

"I…"

*Growlll~*

Lucas blanked out for a moment and suddenly blushed.

"A-ahaha...I guess I am hungry."

"Hahaha! Come on then! Let's eat!"

"Luffy! You just ate!"

As such, Lucas joined everyone to eat.

"Right, what was your name again?"

"Lucas. You can call me Lucas."

"Lucas huh? I'm Luffy! I'm the captain of this pirate ship!"

"Pirate...is it?"

"Ah! Oi Luffy! Don't just go running around saying you're a pirate!"

Usopp quickly admonished Luffy for his carelessness..

Lucas just smiled wryly and pointed at the logo on the sail.

"It's alright. I already figured as much when I saw that logo. You guys seemed different from the normal ruthless pirates so I don't have any issues."

"Ah, you're right haha! I'm called Usopp! But you can call me Captain Usopp!"

"Hey! I just said I'm the captain!"

"Don't mind those two idiots. Say, where did you come from? Ah, by the way. My name is Nami."

Nami rolled her eyes at the two then smiled at Lucas.

Lucas was dazed for a while at her beauty. He knows just from the drawings that she would be beautiful, especially so after the 2-year time skip but meeting her directly was another thing.

Realizing that he has been staring for a bit longer than he should, Lucas coughed and averted his gaze.

"I'm not really sure. When I came to, I was already floating in the middle of the sea. Then I was pulled and...well, I guess you know the rest."

"Hmm...that's really strange...And you don't remember what happened before that?"

"How I got there? No, I don't remember. The last thing I remembered was that I was still at my house."

"Eh? Where is that?"

Lucas thought for a moment before finally deciding.

Anyway, this is another world, there was no use if they knew where he came from.

"That...I think I'm from another world."

Everyone went silent at that before laughing.

"Ahaha! What do you mean another world!?"

"Hey kid, are you still asleep or something!?"

Lucas can only smile wryly at their reaction.

He placed his hands on his pockets to see if there was something.

Sure enough, there was indeed something. His smartphone.

When he pulled it out to see if it was still working despite having been submerged in the water awhile ago, it turns out that it was indeed still working.

Thinking he was just lucky, he tapped on the camera button and snapped a picture of Nami's laughing expression.

"Hm? What's that?"

Being suddenly pointed at with a weird object, Nami stopped laughing and asked.

Lucas smiled and showed her the screen.

"Eh? This is...me?"

"Nami-swaan~"

Sanji, seeing the beauty of Nami's smiling face captured immediately had hearts as his eyes.

"Wow! What's this thing!?"

"This is a smartphone. It's a gadget from my world. You can use it to take a picture, video, play games, and a bunch of stuff."

"Heeeh. I guess you are from a different world. I don't think technology like this exists here. Even in the Grand Line."

Usopp nodded as he looked at the smartphone from all angles.

Nami took the smartphone and started fiddling with it along with Vivi.

After a while, they discovered that they can touch the screen and the image would change accordingly.

They also found the other pictures saved on the phone.

"This is?"

"That's my house. Those are my family and friends."

Lucas looked at the pictures and sighed thinking he may never see them again now that he is in this new world.

However, he didn't stay depressed for long as he quickly snapped out of it.

After all, this is the world of One Piece!

In here, maybe his dreams would come true!

"Alright. Back to the original topic at hand."

Zoro spoke in a deep voice

"About that Mr.2 just now. I think we're lucky that we met him. Now we can use countermeasures."

After some planning, they all continued their journey as the sea drifted them off to the sand kingdom, Alabasta.

Suddenly, a strange cat looking fish appeared from behind.

"Meowwwww!"

"What is that!?"

"A Sea Cat!"

"Let's eat it!"

"No!"

Vivi shouted as she smacked Luffy, Sanji, and Zoro who were about to kill the sea monster.

"You can't eat it! In Alabasta, Sea Cats are sacred animals!"

Lucas laughed as he heard that.

Truly the world of One Piece.

Nami walked towards Vivi and said.

"Vivi, the wind and temperature seem to be stabilized."

"Yes, we've entered the Alabastan Climate Zone. The Sea Cat is more proof."

"I bet those things behind us are even more proof we're close to Alabasta."

Zoro grinned as he looked behind.

Vivi and the rest also looked behind and exclaimed!

"Ships!!!"

Right. Behind them, numerous ships lined up with a unique logo on their sails.

"Hey, they all have Baroque Works signs on them!"

"All the members are coming together!?"

"Those are probably the Billions. Servants of the Officer Agents."

Everyone looked solemn as they looked at the number of enemies behind them.

"Stop getting worried. They're nothing."

Zoro grinned and Sanji nodded as well.

"Yeah. All is lost if we lose sight of our true objective. There's only 9 of us."

9...Lucas wondered if he had already begun to change the story.

This time, it wouldn't be just 8 of them who will attack Crocodile, but 9! And that included Lucas!

Lucas began to think of everything he could change in the story...and people he can save! His resolve to stay only grew.

"Right, what do you plan to do, Lucas?"

Nami asked Lucas as they began to tie up bandages on their left arms.

"Hm?"

"I mean. You don't really have any part in this. I bet you don't even know what's going on. It would be dangerous if you stick with us."

"RIght. In the beginning, this was my fight...It's selfish enough that I asked Luffy and the rest to help me but...you are totally unrelated to this. In fact, none of the officers of Baroque Works knows about you yet."

Vivi added as well.

Hearing this, everyone on the ship looked at Lucas silently, waiting for his response.

Lucas smiled and looked at the bandage on his left arm.

"I know. You guys are probably about to fight this big war...and that the enemies would have mysterious powers or something…"

He paused for a while then finally sighed.

"As I told you before. The world I came from is very much different from this one. There's no devil fruits or any kind of power...heck, I haven't been to any kind of fights...it's a completely normal world."

He touched the bandage covering his left arm and said.

"I'll...keep this for now. In case we happen to meet each other. At least you won't think I'm a fake...But I'll be separating with you guys once we landed."

Everyone was silent for a while but Luffy just laughed.

"Shishishishi! Then that's that! Let's meet again sometime, Lucas!"

He brought forward his hand and shook Lucas.

Lucas smiled as well and said.

"Yeah. But who knows? Maybe that would be sooner than you think."

"Haha, maybe."

Luffy looked into the horizon and saw the island near them.

Vivi also looked and pointed to a direction.

"We're coming up to the harbor. Let's stop in that inlet to the west. We need to hide the ship."

Luffy grinned and stretched his fist forward.

Knowing what he wanted to do, everyone smiled and did the same.

Lucas only smiled and watched from afar.

Nami saw this and pulled him closer.

"What're you doing? Come here!"

"But…"

"Shishishi! Don't sweat the details and show your fist!"

Lucas can only smile wryly and brought his fist forward as well.

"Okay! Whatever happens from now on, this left arm…"

"Is proof of friendship!"

Lucas was excited to be a part of this. He felt that he really is a part of the team. A part of the Strawhat Pirate crew!

"Now...let's get onto dry land! To a restaurant! Then Alabasta."

"Shut up, you idiot!!!"

While the crew made a ruckus, both Vivi and Lucas touched the bandage on their left arms and smiled.

As soon as they reached land, Luffy immediately jumped off and ran!

"Restaurant!!!!"

"Wait!!!"

They tried to stop him but who was Luffy? He just ran off and ignored everyone as usual at his own pace.

"What should we do? Nanohana is a large town. It will be very hard to search for Luffy!"

"Don't worry Vivi-chan, we'll look for the noisiest spot in town. He'll be there."

Sanji assured Vivi who sounded concerned.

Nami sighed as well.

"Anyways, I wish he would pay more heed to the bounty on his head. Especially in a big country like this one!"

"Just let it take care of himself. Let's go eat. We can think things through after that."

Zoro said and was about to move when Vivi noticed a strange ship near them.

"Wait! That's Mr.3's ship!"

"You mean...he's not dead!?"

"That ship can only move through the Doru Doru fruit. He must be in the Kingdom."

Vivi was worried but Lucas knew what will happen so he didn't mind it too much.

"Well, I guess this is where we will part ways…Everyone, Vivi, I wish you all the best of luck."

With a curt bow, Lucas smiled and headed elsewhere.

Everyone looked at each other and sighed.

"Do you think we'll still see him next time?"

"I don't think so...Unless…"

Zoro looked at the distant back of Lucas and trailed off.

"Unless?"

"...No, it's nothing."

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My name is Allen Walker. I lived a quiet and uneventful life until I got into trouble with the school's ultimate bully, Flash Thomson. It was worth it because I was able to protect my friend Gwen and help out a poor guy named Peter Parker. That's right... my life was turned upside down with my school problems. I somehow ended up tangled with bullies like Flash and his rich friend Harry Osborn, and the three beauties of the school, Gwen Stacy, Felicia Hardy, and Mary Jane. I understood why Gwen was there, as she's my friend, but I couldn't understand why the other two girls were interested in me. My destiny should have been getting beaten up by the school bullies, but luckily, I received unexpected help from a miraculous entity called the "The Absolute Content Creator System". This system mainly operates based on viewers and the popularity I gain by providing great content in my world. But somehow, I'm now live-streaming in the middle of the Superman vs. Doomsday fight... yes, it sounds very dangerous and stupid. No one told me I'd be going to the DC world to livestream?! Darkseid is going to kill me!! My aunt Natasha would scream at me for the stupidity I was committing, and she would be right, I mean, I'm streaming it to my world! But I have to be here, even if it's stupid and dangerous. The reason? I have a huge debt of one million dollars because I accidentally ordered a hundred fantasy waifu sex dolls... which have come to life for some reason. Yeah, things are getting complicated!! It sounds insane, but it's real. The first doll was Wednesday Addams, who tried to stab me, and the second was 2B from Nier: Automata, who treated me like her master... I won't complain about that. A bit confusing? Let's recap: - I live in a world that the system calls Marvel... I'm not sure if I should be worried. - I was a normal teenager making YouTube videos and streams, not very popular... – I got involved with the school beauties and that earned me the hatred of the bullies... ¿why? - I was chosen by a system related to content creation. - During a stream, my chat played a prank on me, and I ended up accidentally ordering a hundred very expensive sex dolls that left me in a one-million-dollar debt. - These dolls are coming to life for some reason. - To pay off that debt, I have to use the system that sends me to DC and broadcast craziness like Batman being captured by the Joker or some villain fighting the Justice League. It's not all bad. With a system like in the manga, I become stronger the more popular I get. I gain powers that only appear in comics and anime, and many other things. But, as I said, my world is not normal, and I'll end up getting involved in dangerous things. I knew that when a one-eyed man appeared at my door and said, "Do you know about the Avengers Initiative?"... I think I should definitely be worried about that. While things are bad with all that, my chat is full of trolls and assholes. To make matters worse, my congenital bad luck leads me into stupid and dangerous situations all the time. For example: entering Harley Quinn's room and having relations with her while the Joker is nearby or kicking Darkseid in the balls... Maybe I'll get killed soon, but if not, I'll continue live-streaming the best content on social media... I just hope the system doesn't stream to strange places. If you want to read chapters in advance, be able to see the images that webnovel does not want and support me here I leave you my patreon. Patreon.com/_Aizen A/N: Hello, I hope you like this story and support it. English is not my native language, so I hope you don't mind the grammatical errors.

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the story is about the mc who found himself in one piece, so the mc as a super fanboy of Luffy and his crew decide to help Luffy. ( note: Luffy don't know what is the meaning of a pirate, he think of it as a game) well, usually every fanfiction is writing because of the author like how the fiction world is, or because the beauties, or the powers inside this world, and it is rare to see mc willing to be the side character like this novel, as everyone knows the moment the mc moved to this world normally he must seek his goal coz he is not watching the show anymore but a real world, but the mc of this novel did not awaken from his otaku mode and set a goal to help some random guys in this world that have no relationship with him, yes I know he loved Luffy but that is not a reason to set aside your life and be his babysitter. as for him revealing his secrets to the straw hats, (let's not mention that Luffy is just like a child that he can't keep secrets at all ), only if the author is not writing this fanfic for readers but to pass time than I think he must not let his mc open his moth every time because all readers prefer a calm and cautious mc, as I can see the straw hats have no right to question his origin, (let's not mention that he look like a little kid that want talk about himself). I read it to 90 chapters not because I like it but because I wanted to see the mc wake up and part ways with the straw hats, but what did he do? he became the cupid of love for Luffy and boa and Zoro and his girl than telling them they are manga characters created by oda, sigh and that's the moment I know it hopeless i have no right to tell the author on how to write his novel so good luck

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this is me giving an honest review. I'm going to be fair and not just say harsh things but the few small good things as well. the story in the beginning was good, a fresh and original way to wake up and find yourself in one piece ( though afterwards the way the OC tried to help out the straw hats even though he knew he was normal and had no powers was very unrealistic. no one in their right mind no matter how much they cared about Luffy in the crew in the show, end the end to them it's just an anime, nothing more or less, to put their lives on the line for especially when they're about to face the their first big hurdle on the Grand line against the strongest foe they've come across yet with logia abilities. for this part it would have been better if he have reincarnated in the East blue at least there he would have had a chance at surviving even though your normal this is if he'd still decided to follow Luffy by the way if you have went off on his own he would have been fine). but yeah so MC decides to go and at least warned the Rebellion which is still within human limits even though you might be regarded as a spy captured and imprisoned but still within human limits. but after this MC makes the dumbest most illogical decision especially coming from someone who already knows what kind of powers and strength the people from the one piece world have. he decides to go I try to kill crocodile with the palace soldiers just because he knows he's weak to water as if he hadn't seen Luffy get wrecked by crocodile even when we had the same strategy now this was stupid by all means just a forceful way to move the story along just so we can see the MC power awaken. now regardless of all things this is actually the part that I liked because of the title everyone was wondering what type of devil fruit the MC will get when I found out it was a water logia one which definitely could be considered the ultimate fruit in the one piece World by far I thought" wow if the author uses this power right I can forgive all the dumb s*** that happened earlier" and lo and behold he does MC uses the power and versatile and ingenious ways as you should if you are a reincarnator from Earth and even the comedy picks up along the way and the story just ends up jamming along with the one piece vibe with a few hiccups along the way(mc telling people he's from another world and I mean everybody and MC sharing knowledge that he knows of the future that is never a good thing in a story especially in a fanfic like one piece especially not with the main character like Luffy he's not going to want to know that anyway so why did you even open up your mouth there was absolutely no reason for you to do this you just wanted a reason to do a time travel Arc so you can go back in the past and collect Robin's mom and I could tell that you were even thinking about Odin's wife for a little bit but at least you have a little smidgen of Shame left and decided not to). this leads to after marineford Arc this is where stuff starting to get really bad as I said the MC ends up going back in time after a supposed death after the war ends up on Rogers ship sails the ocean with them for just a little while and actually ends up acknowledging him is your captain!!!!!????? hold up hold up I know people are giving you a lot of grief about fanboying over Luffy and stuff but at least once you decided something stick to it. ever heard of loyalty much do you think Zoro or any of the other crew would ever go and acknowledge somebody else as their Captain just because they sailed on the same ship as them for a little while? come on man. eventually after sailing around with Rodger for a while they meet Whitebeard clash with them a few times and eventually ends up meeting Odin and his wife who are who is basically the key to him getting back to his own time. the dumb part is he tries to play off her character as someone who is very manipulative and not understanding of others plight because she basically ends up using him to fight off kaido which is super dumb because you basically just went off and triggered one of the end games fights way before it's supposed to happen and not even with your own crew and Captain good job stealing that Adventure and fight from them. also Odin's wife character is nothing like that if she had the to send him back to his original time she would have done it the moment he asked especially when he told her he had a wife and kid he was going back to especially considering he and Odin are friends she definitely isn't the type to manipulate others for her own gains you can tell that just by reading the whole back story Oda does on the wano country. So eventually after being used to fight kaido MC gets sent back to his own time ends up loitering around fisherman Island waiting on the straw hats and expanding more on his water Powers by learning Fishman karate which should have been done way earlier by one of the Fishman on Rogers crew who knew Fishman karate and was probably stronger than jinbei at the time but author probably just wanted it for the excuse of hey let's have the MC interact with jinbei while on Fishman Island after this thing's get way worse all the women in the World start throwing themselves at the MC just because.... come on bro. turns out ultimate Fruit Stand For he can copy any devil fruit in the world so he's basically God now so no more tension between the fights or skill after all MC can just stop time and kill you in a second. MC also decides to take over all of Luffy's fights just because even though those fights are supposed to be for Luffy's growth and even now author is supposedly having the MC go to Wano in order to kill kaido over something he really shouldn't even be triggered over "oh no it turns out one of the seven scabbard's was a traitor I wasn't expecting that when I wrote this fanfic" LOL yeah it wouldn't have been such a big deal if you have went off on your own and got your own adventure instead of piggybacking off Luffy's. so yeah this turned into a rant basically a classic case of a good story gone bad in the middle and turning into a complete s*** by the end so not worth your time.

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notlairLv5

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