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I like it but you can't do the system interns in normal letters because when I translate it to Spanish it doesn't translate for me please

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I like it.. The only thing I did not like about My system in Hollywood was that the protagonist became a very fast boyfriend, he is in Hollywood by God, who as a boy has not dreamed of sleeping (having sex) with stars there .. I get upset that the protagonist is with someone who is meh and doesn't have much development and fell in love in a month and a half during the shoot.. The majority of relationships like that do not work much in Hollywood, and those that work are exceptions since, one earns more than the other, jealousy comes there, also if the actor/triz is handsome/cute, jealousy always comes for the movies that they are going to film, because always but always in most movies there are hot kisses or scenes (sex, touch etc). And hence jealousy comes, infidelities, among many shady things .. The truth does not matter the romance in Hollywood very well, that's why it has to be casual relationships where everything is agreed, and they just enjoy themselves for a while and that's it, no strings attached, then when you already get tired will marry you with someone you see who is trustworthy, who will not betray you and above all that is not from Hollywood hahaha

It is your story but it is a shame, there are many people from Hollywood who would be good that it was love interest and eye to have intimate contact or have sex, be friends with sex, with many women it is not harem ...

The novel is fine, I like the direction, I just don't like the construction of characters, it's very simple and repetitive that it annoys me to read it, the romantic aspect was really rushed, there are many girls who can be FMC but you chose one in the first chapters that was super forced and now you hardly mention her, the best thing would have been for him to be single, enjoy his youth and marry a woman when he is already 30 years old, but what to do, I hope he changes this aspect because it is killing me with boredom

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57 chapters and we still don't see the protagonist's progress, the story is boring and smooth from chapter 37 onwards it's almost a copy of the canon just that with another character the very disappointing truth ..

Es lo mismo sólo que con un personaje mas ... . . Esperaba algo mas pero bueno que se le va a hacer solo daré 2 estrellas por que me entretuve unos 3 minutos ..

En capítulos anteriores tenia 250 de resistencia.. Por que ahora sólo tiene 230?