It's good to read but my only problem is the mc.. It makes me really annoyed. Author keeps making mc mentions that he is from another world that it turns off people from continuing this. And it's funny that this mc keeps using his power then faint. Giving him power is really just a waste he is more suited on becoming a messenger or just a civilian.

it's so boring the drama is so disgusting that I couldn't even read it. Man tried very hard to finish it off the main character doesn't even take advantage of his fruit that heals him every time he's tired to train his body and says that I hate training his body, in a world where physical strength is almost everything and having an advantage like that does not train him is so stupid that bored their relationships came out of nowhere that it was that out of nowhere falls in love nami after that goes Robin then you add I lived after Kalifa falls in love and you leave her lying because you don't want to do more than 5 women, it's stupid man that you would feel if you fell in love with someone but then take it aside because you like someone more so disgusting for that, don't make him fall in love with the main character

the story is about the mc who found himself in one piece, so the mc as a super fanboy of Luffy and his crew decide to help Luffy. ( note: Luffy don't know what is the meaning of a pirate, he think of it as a game) well, usually every fanfiction is writing because of the author like how the fiction world is, or because the beauties, or the powers inside this world, and it is rare to see mc willing to be the side character like this novel, as everyone knows the moment the mc moved to this world normally he must seek his goal coz he is not watching the show anymore but a real world, but the mc of this novel did not awaken from his otaku mode and set a goal to help some random guys in this world that have no relationship with him, yes I know he loved Luffy but that is not a reason to set aside your life and be his babysitter. as for him revealing his secrets to the straw hats, (let's not mention that Luffy is just like a child that he can't keep secrets at all ), only if the author is not writing this fanfic for readers but to pass time than I think he must not let his mc open his moth every time because all readers prefer a calm and cautious mc, as I can see the straw hats have no right to question his origin, (let's not mention that he look like a little kid that want talk about himself). I read it to 90 chapters not because I like it but because I wanted to see the mc wake up and part ways with the straw hats, but what did he do? he became the cupid of love for Luffy and boa and Zoro and his girl than telling them they are manga characters created by oda, sigh and that's the moment I know it hopeless i have no right to tell the author on how to write his novel so good luck

TRRRAAASSSSHHHHHHHH.....MC FUCKING TRASHHHHHH.HIS FUCKING USLESSSSSSSS A FUCKING STUPID MC JUST LIKE THE FUCKING AUTHOR.DDDDDDDDDHJKSAHHFOUHEWUHASDJHFJK

If u cnt beat beat thenm(marine) ,joint them, typical coward mc. Ultimate fruit my ass , thas bs.

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Author = Luffy's FANBOY the mc is retard thats the only thing future readers to know. this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy this fanfic sux author luffy's fanboythis fanfic sux author luffy's fanboy

Bro your story is very good, please don't drop it, it has so much potential. I will always deposit my stones in your story...............................................................................................

First few chapter are good even though theres some annoying stuff that happening its still good. Although he join the strawhat crew mc still feels like an mc not just a support or a pov of a side character in luff’s crew. But as the chapters progress theres bullsh*t every where. Real life logic are ignore, but its still ok cuz he can make his own logic in a superpower world. Its ok if you make your own logic of how the world works but ignoring your own created logic is a load of crap. You introduce a new logic and ignores it in a few chapters. Introduce a mc’s power but forget how it works in a few chapters. Make mc’s personality like this but change it in a few chapters. And in recent chapters author is forcing the plot to continue(although with change, but still a bit to force) Also author is nerfing mc little by little, or more like restricting him and not doing some smart move to make the fight longer. And the Lucius guy plot is bull. Cliche stuff. I really love this novel until water 7 arc. A shame... Still writing quality is 5 for me(well compare to others in this site)