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Traveler The Myriads Of Planes

Hello, ladies and gentlemen, my name is Bryan Growl, and i'm the author of this fanfic. I'm warning y'all that I'm new to this, and i need your comments to help me to improve. Be warned that any offensive comments will be deleted for good, so keep this in mind. Now, stay whit the synopsis. - Synopsis - *** Jaden Newman, is a young man that has poor luck in his life. Being 30 years old, and still unemployed, his life is a big joke of sadness and sorrow. His only happiness is his family. He loves, and is loved by his mother, father, and little sister. But recently he has been losing all hope to find a job and live his on life. Life is mysterious, because it walks side by side with death. One day Jaden was walking back home after one more frustrating interview, when suddenly he is visited by truck-kun and dies. Will this be his end, or the beginning of such catastrophic events, that will shake all the existence planes? Want to figure it out? Interested? The Travel through the Myriads Of Planes, stars now! *** - Aarrrrhhggg! Are fking kidding me? How the fck am i going to have "work experience" if no one hire me? What the actual fck is wrong whit this system? - Sigh - Fck my life! - Vibrates - - Vibrates - - Helo, mom... No, it was mess... Yes, yes... Thanks... See you soon. Bye... I love you too mo- - Loud sound of a truck horn - - Crash sounds - - Son, son! What happened? Son!... - Grunt - Ouch Arrgh the pain! It's burning! Arrgghh! I can't breathe, i can't breathe! Someone please help me! I don't want to die please - Sob - Mom, Dad, July, i'm sorry... *** - Darkness - - Grunt - Hmm. What happened. Argh, the pain... it's gone!? The pain is gone, thank God! Wait it's not just the pain that it's gone, i can't feel anything. - Suddenly the lights turn on - - Hmm - Open eyes - What is this blinding light? Why is so white? Wait where the fck am i?... - End of synopsis - That's is guys please support me. I'm just a beginner. Please help me whit your comments. See y'all in TTMOP !!!

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Chapter 4 - The time flies, and Death?

Time surely flies. Just like a snap of fingers, 3 years passed. Now i have 8 years old and i keep jumping classes. It's meaningless because i can just learn everything instantly, be it P.E. or full flagged martial arts like MMA, included but not limited to Krav Maga, Muay Thai, Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu, Judo, Karate, and Kung Fu. With all of this i created my own MMA style, and i call it: Asa No Taiken or [Morning Experience] in English. Pretty nice, right?

My style is pretty destructive and i use all that weight of my body to perform peak human feats. Just like Batman! I still have my 8 year old body but i look like i have 10 and my muscles are starting to show up. Morning Experience infinite sustain really do miracles! Ha Ha!

The Goddess never spoke with me again since 3 years ago and i'm starting to feel my time with my powers ending. I'll not blame them my wishes were really broken since the beginning of my new life.

What pisses me off, is that they just don't want to tell me what happened and why it is happening. I hate this! It reminds me of those job interviews. Instead of saying why they didn't hire me, they just say "we will contact you", and they will not contact you ever again.

_ Argh! *Grunt* Just to think about it annoys me!

** Nathan (Jaden's Father) Pov **

_ Ha ha ha! Just look our little boy, babe. He seams to be holding the weight of the world, in his back! Children really have a fertile mind!

_ Yeah they have. - Said Charlotte.

_ I hope he grows well. - Spoke Nathan whit sad tone.

_ What happened Dear? Are you thinking about something? - Said Charlotte concerned.

_ No, i'm just looking forward to my retirement. This will be my last mission with the Plumbers. It's just gonna be a prisoner transfer mission, to the Null Void Incarcecon. We aren't going to enter the Null Void! We'll just take it from the Edge Of The Galaxy Incarcecon unit, to the closest Plumbers Null Void gate. As simple as that! And i'm not going alone, Max is going with me! He is already retired, but he will be visiting his old friend, called Phil. - Spoke Nathan with confidence.

_ I don't know, my love, i have a bad feeling about this mission. Can't you just ask for another Plumber, to do this job? - Said Charlotte feeling really uncomfortable about the mission.

_ Ha ha! You don't have to worry, honey! When i come back i'll have more time to play with Jay (Jaden's nickname), and we will have our second honey moon. I promise! Said Nate(Nathan's nickname) trying to comfort Charlotte.

_ I trust you Dear. I love you. - Said Charlotte affectionately.

_ Jay! Come here, and give me a hug! Argh! Ha ha! That's my boy! You're becoming stronger every day! Ha ha! It won't take long, for you, to match your old man's strength! - *Kiss* Nate kissed Jaden cheek tenderly.

_ Dad, are you going to work? - Jaden asked.

_ Yeah! This is going to be my last job, before i retire, then we can play more when i come back. - Nathan said with a smile i his face.

** End Of Nathan's Pov **

_ Ok, i love you Dad. - I said, now really sad.

_ What's up champ, want to make me cry? Ha ha! I'll be back soon! - Dad said, now a little concerned.

_ Ok, see you Dad! - I said cheering up.

_ Now go to play champ, me an your mom will have a couple talk before i go. Ha ha! - Dad said, holding mom's waist tight.

Fuuuuck! Why, did you do this to me? Now i'm sure you're gonna die, dumb ass motherfucker! Why, did you raise all the possible death flags? You dumb ass moron! What's even worse, is that i can't go with this suicidal, piece of shit! *Sigh*

***

Suddenly, everything turns white, and i recognize where i am.

_ Jaden Newman!(Female voice)

_ Shit! Not Now! Argh! *Grunt* Ahem! *Clean throat* Helo, the most beautiful Goddess in whole existence! It's been a long time! May i know the reason of your Excellency visit?

_ Ho, i see that this new life, did you good! Very well, that's what I like to hear!... Now, for the reason that i called you. I had a meeting with the other Gods, to discuss if you will keep your powers or we will retrieve it from you!

_ Oh, ok! What was the verdict your Excellency?

_ The verdict is that, we will retrieve all your powers. They are to powerful for a human like you! So, with all my benevolence, i have decided, to let you keep your powers for, one more day!

_ I understand. But what about me? Didn't i deserve a word, or two, if it was my wishes that were discussed? That doesn't make sense! - I said frustrated.

_ Ha! You inferior human! Did you really thought, that you could make wishes that will make you even more powerful then ourselves? Do not make me laugh! For this petulance of yours, questioning the Gods decisions, i'll take all your powers now!

_ What? Wait, Goddess Celestia! What did i do wrong?

_ Do not say my name in vain! *Thunder sounds* Your sin was being greedy and wish for powers that rivals the Gods! Repent! Now, i will take powers of Life Mastery, Instant Learning, and Planeswalking! From now on, Jaden Newman, is just a powerless mortal! And for the sin, of saying my name in vain, i will take your life, and your soul, will be banished to the Endless Void realm!

_ Wait! You bitch you think that this is over? Even in nonexistence i will prevail! I'll come back and kill all of you fuckers! I swear!

Celestia, enraged, summoned Holy light, and shoot a beam of light, in my direction! The last thing that i heard, was the cackle of Morning Experience, jumping right in front of the beam. Then i felt my flesh burning, my bones pulverizing, and at the end only the cold darkness remained.

( A/N: So what will happen with our MC? He told only empty words, or he will fulfill his promised revenge? Maybe, he will find a new purpose? See you, in the next chapters!)

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