The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister

I was excited to read it, but I already gave up on the first chapter, the MC is just a puppet of a larger entity...........................................................

Why would the MC still act respectful to his father when he knew he could almost get away with anything he do, because of his fathers personality?

Looks good so far(excited to see a new fic rather than more stolen work)

A beautiful story with an even more beautiful beginning. The only issue is the writing quality. It's not bad—in fact, it's good—but I hope it improves even further.

Love the fact of using the old lion as MC and most of all his system is not too OP. Great work

Well I make the first proper comment to this stpry just a few minutes ago but I noticed I pretty much wrote a smallish review and this I believed it was worthy to make it officially a review since this stpry deserve it. I am loving this story and I truly hope the Author won’t drop it and will write many chapter lol… it is rare to find a pre game of thrones and post house of dragon fanfic with no self insert as a Targaryen, stark or John snow the one as young Robert Baratheon or a Lannister for the most part are dropped or of low quality except one that I know of that is also an hp crossover with a lot (too much) of smut. This one as a young tiwyn Lannister is so refreshing and full of potential because of how it is a fact the mc will become Op and he is growing quickly but still the growth is gradual well fleshed out and you are truly building a solid plot with interesting new contents too. There may be a harem pairing but it won’t be the focus for sure and it will be done tastefully and in a fitting way for the plot based on what the author has done till now so I would advise the no harem sect to give it a try too. Keep going me author Keep going

Very creative fanfic, one of the best i have read so far, i really looking forvard how it will develop ( author please dont be the kind that can be bullied into writting clishe )

It's been a while since I've enjoyed a GoT fan fic by anyone else. This one pleases me. Maybe because it's set in a time period that I haven't studied thoroughly, but I don't see any big errors in the world building. At most the dialogue needs tightening up with words like 'yeah' removed and replaced. Otherwise a tight fic with an appreciation of the themes. Good work.

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Fairly good and plausible story ............................................................................................................................................................................................. ........................................................... :)

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give me more of this drug! I NEED MY FIX!

Great book with interesting MC. Looking forward to many more chapters!

Great GOT fanfic, only thin I’m not satisfied is quite slow release.

Good pace with added likable characters and world building. Couldnt have sales for more plus you got Tywin f* Lanniater as mc. The only bad thing i see about the book so far is that it has not too many chapters, but you just have to wait for that so… Also wouldnt want author to rush the story cuz hes not getting stones, just be patient, what is good will allways shine.

Good work, do not drop it!!! Keep it up!!

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Enjoying the book so far, good writing, looking forward to reading more of your stuff! The idea is definitely unique for me as I've never read a book with the MC entering into another character while being himself, it's definitely cool!

This story is so good!! Keep it up author! You got this, I really like character development. And the mc being a Tywin Lannister makes it more unique compared to GoT fanfics.