webnovel
Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv106mth
2024-06-09 05:37

I was excited to read it, but I already gave up on the first chapter, the MC is just a puppet of a larger entity...........................................................

The Vengeful Lion of House Lannister

HungryWolf2024
4.5
38 Chs

Liked by 17 people

LIKE
Replies4
ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13

Gotta give more info than that. How Is he a puppet? What makes him one?

6mth
4
Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4

Did you give it a try?

ArtoriaPendragon_:Gotta give more info than that. How Is he a puppet? What makes him one?
5mth
ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv13

Nope. Guy never game me info on what he meant by a puppet, so I never bothered with reading it.

Jama1810:Did you give it a try?
5mth
2
Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2

Well said.

3mth
Other Reviews
Raven5123
Raven5123Lv4

Why would the MC still act respectful to his father when he knew he could almost get away with anything he do, because of his fathers personality?

6mth

Curtis_Allinson_6062
Curtis_Allinson_6062Lv4

Looks good so far(excited to see a new fic rather than more stolen work)

7mth
_biba_
_biba_Lv15

Love the fact of using the old lion as MC and most of all his system is not too OP. Great work

3mth
crazyspecter
crazyspecterLv14

Well I make the first proper comment to this stpry just a few minutes ago but I noticed I pretty much wrote a smallish review and this I believed it was worthy to make it officially a review since this stpry deserve it. I am loving this story and I truly hope the Author won’t drop it and will write many chapter lol… it is rare to find a pre game of thrones and post house of dragon fanfic with no self insert as a Targaryen, stark or John snow the one as young Robert Baratheon or a Lannister for the most part are dropped or of low quality except one that I know of that is also an hp crossover with a lot (too much) of smut. This one as a young tiwyn Lannister is so refreshing and full of potential because of how it is a fact the mc will become Op and he is growing quickly but still the growth is gradual well fleshed out and you are truly building a solid plot with interesting new contents too. There may be a harem pairing but it won’t be the focus for sure and it will be done tastefully and in a fitting way for the plot based on what the author has done till now so I would advise the no harem sect to give it a try too. Keep going me author Keep going

3mth
Werepanda
WerepandaLv13

Very creative fanfic, one of the best i have read so far, i really looking forvard how it will develop ( author please dont be the kind that can be bullied into writting clishe )

3mth
DaoistCGid7j
DaoistCGid7jLv2

A beautiful story with an even more beautiful beginning. The only issue is the writing quality. It's not bad—in fact, it's good—but I hope it improves even further.

6mth
xNoReadNoLifex
xNoReadNoLifexLv5

Thank you for this fanfiction. I like the system and the stats. I just wish Tywin would start to meta game his system. Abuse it a little more.Additionally, is there any way to know the stats of others characters?

1mth
Silas_Savitar_
Silas_Savitar_Lv3

Story progresses slowly, grammer is fine. Good politics are present.

1mth
stuart_auden
stuart_audenLv1

Good story need more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1mth
Related Stories

Game of Thrones: Second Son of House Targaryen

As soon as I opened my eyes, I found myself in the world of Game of Thrones as the second son of House Targaryen, the brother of the Mother of Dragons, Viserys! I found that the timing of this transmigration was a bit too bad. At this time, the Targaryen dynasty had already fallen, the guards who protected me and my sister had already died, there was no rice in the house, and there were people outside collecting debts. And I, after selling my mother's crown, became a Beggar King. Putting aside the matter of restoring the kingdom, I have to pay back my debt first. *This is a Translation* Name: 权游龙二哥 Author: 浴前带膘侍卫 Transliteration: Quan Youlong's Second Brother Author: Fat Guard Before Bath Raw:xiaoshuo.qq.com/detail/1049152280 Keep in mind that in the only available raws I found, there are only 100 public chapters, the rest are behind a paywall. I got more chapters by paying for coins or by acquiring them in the Chinese app.

BlurryDream · Book&Literature
4.6
458 Chs

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

[A Harry Potter Fanfiction] Follow Quinn West, who finds himself in the world of Harry Potter, but are things as they seem, is the world he has landed in the same as the one he once read about. Will Quinn able to find his way in this new world? Will he ever be able to feel like he belongs here? What opportunity would the magic of this world provide him? Will it lead him to the light or drown him in the dark? Tag along as Quinn makes his way into the world of magic as he discovers the secrets behind the infinite potential behind the magic that is within his grasp. -*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*-*- This novel is my escape from the burnout that I suffered from my other novel. I have no solid plotline planned, there will be no definite release schedule. The reason for me writing is to improve my writing skills, light my brain cells. As you know that there are so many Harry Potter Fanfictions out there, it is the largest FanFiction community out there, and as I write this novel, I don't have anything in my mind that isn't already out there, but I am trying to create a piece of transformative work that would pick up ideas from that wide community and create a work that would be enjoyable to read. So, give this content a chance, and I hope that this novel would stand up to your expectations. --------------------------------------------------------------- DISCORD SERVER: https://discord.gg/w5dJ82SfMr --------------------------------------------------------------- PATREON LINK: https://www.patreon.com/fictiononlyreader --------------------------------------------------------------- DISCLAIMER: I don't own any character other than my OCs. The cover pic is also not mine.

FictionOnlyReader · Book&Literature
4.6
442 Chs

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Follow Alaric in his journey to be the strongest wizard out there by hook or by crook. This is the story of a guy who went to a different world to get power and to find new relationships in his life. Read how he fights off Voldemort in process becoming the leader of new generation of wizards and builds up his new life with his new friends, family and wife. A story of a wizard using his wisdom and power to ascend to the pinnacle of the world, who will do anything to protect his new family. This is a little slow paced and also somewhat slice of life story so keep that in mind, that focuses more on Alaric's relationship. There will be heavy changes to the original plot so be aware and also MC becomes overpowered rather quickly as the story moves forward and he won't hesitate to take some drastic measures if necessary, so he won't have a moral compass. If you want to support me and read advance chapters please visit: patreon.com/bobthewriter Main World: Harry Potter Second World: Game of Thrones Third World: ..... #harrypotter #gameofthrones Cover Image isn't mine original creator can contact me to remove it. I don't own this story, and this work and characters are entirely fictional, any resemblance is purely coincidental, and imitation is strongly discouraged.

bobthewriter · Book&Literature
4.8
397 Chs

Last of The Fae

Unlike other muggle borns Thane always knew magic was real. He could feel it in the world around him and even more importantly, within himself. But isolated and alone Thane could only dream of one day going out into the world and discovering if there were others like him. But Thane would have never guessed that there was an entire hidden world where everyone was either a wizard or a witch. Thane also never would have guessed that he had a bigger role to play in the grand scheme of the world, one that would require him to grow and learn faster than any reasonable person would expect. --- If you want to read more of Last of the Fae consider subscribing my patreon where there is up to 16 advanced chapters for you to read. Or you join as a free member to get access to character art work, polls for feedback and plot development, and more! At: patreon.com/Black_Paladyn

Black_Paladyn · Book&Literature
4.5
72 Chs
Login